lifetime friends#2
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Sep 19 '03
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another gas mask?
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Wondered where this series was going... Again, text and image just don't jive. Look into other fonts / weights.
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I'd buy it without the text and a smaller image.
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leave text out or change font and saying
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smaller graphic would work much nicer! And take out the text would help too
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One for the gas mask fetishists I think.
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it's still a nice piece of art. But, shrink the entire design down, center it, lose the stupid words and make up something like the "Hindenburg Cafe" or something.
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the text does no justice. ok though.
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Hey mattsiah, thanks for the "excellent design tips". Man where did you study?! And... about the stupid, keep it to your self, ok mf?
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i love everything but the font... try something sans serif
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I like this illustration better than the last, but maybe trying to keep a consistent style would link the series more. Personally I think you could have alot of fun with the bubbly circles you have added. There are some very nice "rounded" fonts that would play off the outline, and circles very well. I definately disagree with mattsiah, in fact its my tendecy to offset things even more. So feel free to experiment, this is your concept. See what you come up with.
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