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lifetime friends#1

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Sep 19 '03
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]-[x]-[ on Sep 19 '03
Like the illustration, the text doesn't really go. Look into different fonts / weights.
waxxmon
waxxmon on Sep 23 '03
i agree x.
kickatruckx
kickatruckx on Sep 24 '03
This would definately benefit from a different font, or no text at all. The style of the illustration seems very organic, and hand drawn, so you may try to create some text by hand. I like the concept of "lifetime friends" so you may want to push that more. Don't be afraid to throw a huge vertical LIFETIME FRIEND #1 down the side in a semi-messy script. I think it would sell the idea more, on this "series" atleast. Nice concept, good work.



PS- you should put this on a brown shirt, then I'd buy it. :)
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skunkdudette
skunkdudette on Oct 11 '03
no... the text is perfict. the graphic is perfict. the color is perfict. -kuiama
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