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Tiny Toy Talons

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Feb 02 '07
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About my design

by jhl786   
It's a collage of antique engravings, mostly tools and machinery. It has really great detail up close and it's a saw-whet owl for anyone who is interested. it works with any light color and can be inverted to work on dark colors.
Julie McMillon
Julie McMillon on Feb 02 '07
nice
Julie McMillon
Julie McMillon on Feb 02 '07
nice
maggie-californication
maggie-californication on Feb 02 '07
this is an amazing design, i love it!! i wish i could see it closer up though, and what's that little thing in the corner?
sarELITE
sarELITE on Feb 02 '07
zoom please?
Ross Mc.
Ross Mc. on Feb 02 '07
thats really good
jhl786
   jhl786 on Feb 02 '07
Here's a larger image.



http://photos-659.ak.facebook.com/ip002/v65/231/20/145000011/n145000011_30022659_2260.jpg



the mouse is an oil can in case you can't read it
cityauctor
cityauctor on Feb 02 '07
wow, great detail
PhineasX
PhineasX on Feb 02 '07
I might go for a dark inverted version.
jhl786
   jhl786 on Feb 02 '07
i like it inverted too
yion072
yion072 on Feb 02 '07
Woooah the zoom changes my score. Find a way to zoom on this page or your score is going to suffer! $5!
jhl786
   jhl786 on Feb 02 '07
yeah... it's my first submission so the submission page threw me for a loop...
yion072
yion072 on Feb 02 '07
Hopefully people won't be lazy and will check out the zoomed in version. This reminds me of something that would on imaginaryfoundation.com
jhl786
   jhl786 on Feb 02 '07
someone mention that to me after i made this. they have some crazy awesome designs.
tesco
   tesco on Feb 02 '07
I really like it. I would like to see it bigger on the shirt and prehaps have a less obvious place for the mouse - why not on the lower back or something? The black and white looks hot™. I cant see me digging it inverted. Black and white owl with abstract areas of primary watercolour done in super fine halftone as a backdrop would be ill imo. 5$ anyway
cait9885
cait9885 on Feb 02 '07
great design! but i'm not a fan of the pink.
crap
crap on Feb 02 '07
love the owl!
bobbil
bobbil on Feb 02 '07
looks great! I want one or two.
sonmi
   sonmi on Feb 02 '07
nice technique
goneril
goneril on Feb 02 '07
the detail is amazing. I'm rooting for the oil can rat
jstumpenhorst
   jstumpenhorst on Feb 02 '07
nice work.
Kogepan
Kogepan on Feb 02 '07
$5.
potatoesrus
potatoesrus on Feb 02 '07
wow, super de duper
Latestfever
Latestfever on Feb 02 '07
perhaps a different shirt color :)
goldkiss
   goldkiss on Feb 03 '07
good !
Scotticus
   Scotticus on Feb 03 '07
awesome design! You think this will convert to apparel well? oh f#*k it... i'd wear this in a heartbeat(on anything except pink) 5
lesquelette
lesquelette on Feb 03 '07
Great use of collage. Yes, on different shirt color. Is there a way to see it inverted? Very nice work.
jhl786
   jhl786 on Feb 03 '07
here's a rough smaple on another color and a straight up inversion.



http://photos-682.ak.facebook.com/ip002/v65/231/20/145000011/n145000011_30022682_2361.jpg
shibbyfu
shibbyfu on Feb 03 '07
i'd really really like it without the mouse/oil can...
lofty softy
   lofty softy on Feb 03 '07
good for sure.
wimbels
wimbels on Feb 04 '07
Really really cool, I wish there was a zoom!!!, I checked out the link though and it is nice.
ideaprison
ideaprison on Feb 04 '07
i like it but except for the rat at the bottom
bfly
bfly on Feb 04 '07
THE BOSS
sbdun
sbdun on Feb 04 '07
this is so beautiful. i'm crossing my fingers that this get printed!
dylboteque
dylboteque on Feb 04 '07
I would give it a $5 if it didn't have the mouse and the owl was centered. as it is I'll drop to 3, sorry.
jhl786
   jhl786 on Feb 04 '07
sorry, i didn't understand that. are you saying you want the owl more off center?
finletter
finletter on Feb 05 '07
AAAAAH awesome.

placement is so good

design is so good.

$5 for sure.
epey82
epey82 on Feb 05 '07
$5 This shirt is bomb. Normally pink does not float my boat but this looks great actually.
sugatank
sugatank on Feb 05 '07
pretty damn hot, owls are ruling lately:)
reagen
reagen on Feb 05 '07
rat=oil... ahhh... I like it anyway or maybe because of that... great detail
Zostara
Zostara on Feb 05 '07
This is fantastic!! Really creative, awesome detail. I'd wear it !!
Gwendyyy
Gwendyyy on Feb 05 '07
look who's playing too... he he



this is fun.
optimisticemo
optimisticemo on Feb 05 '07
$5
medicyanide
medicyanide on Feb 05 '07
Great design, it works pretty much any way you color it-- and.... it's lovely.
asfi235
asfi235 on Feb 05 '07
This is awesome, though I fear the detail is pushing the limit of what's screenable onto a t-shirt.



I have several t-shirts that were screened by collage artist Freddie Baer. One of them has this image:



www.amazon.co.jp



...and on the shirt, though it's nonetheless a work of art, there's noticeably less detail present. (Point of reference: Hanes Beefy-T, ca. 1990. YMMV with modern tees.)



You can sorta see some Freddie Baer tees in one of the photos here (3rd across and 3 down, should be obvious though):



www.noosfere.org



(If she hadn't stopped her T-Shirt of the Month Club years and years ago, I wouldn't be needing Threadless :D)



This isn't meant to rain on your parade at all. Sorry if it comes across that way......but I do think that your lovely fan lace would suffer as a result of the production process.
ajbossa
ajbossa on Feb 06 '07
the best one so far!
mammabeesley
mammabeesley on Feb 06 '07
tres good. birds are bestest.
androidi
androidi on Feb 06 '07
especially on a t-shirt I'd probably go for the dotted line to indicate where the owl is looking... or move the mouse a bit higher. the mouse gets too easily ignored as it is currently. but otherwise an awesome design, J. scored 5 from me.
snowchic33
snowchic33 on Feb 06 '07
I love the owl, but the smoke trail doesn't seem to fit at all, it ruins the shape and flight of the owl imo
Kitty_Kura
Kitty_Kura on Feb 06 '07
Great design! I love the detail.
midnightblue88
midnightblue88 on Feb 07 '07
I think I'd like it better on a different color, but it's still a great design. I'd totally buy this. 5
LaMola07
LaMola07 on Feb 07 '07
I think is cool. Maybe on something other than pink though.
fcampbell
fcampbell on Feb 07 '07
jamie if it wins i'll buy it...u are cool 2
aspector
aspector on Feb 07 '07
well done.
reagen
reagen on Feb 07 '07
the more I look at it the more I am amazed
nicomediae
nicomediae on Feb 08 '07
beautiful design. congrats on your first submission and keep up the good work. now for the constructive criticism:



1) i second the concerns that have been already been raised re: screen printing, 2) ditto on pink color, would prefer either combinations of gray, light blue, cream, brown, or black...or a combination of bright and a dark is intriguing, though I personally don't like bright yellow, 3) would like to see mouse tipped up slightly, head higher than hind, so the form is more dynamic--as if the little guy is jumping and startled rather than running straight ahead, 4) i like the mouse closer to the owl, as done in the details, because there's an added tension/excitement to the moment right before capture (...or escape?), which is lost in the pink shirt, 5) though i understand the need to differentiate mouse and owl, i would prefer a little less contrast in the mouse, so that it incorporates some more of the delicate, engraved quality of the owl--but for some reason i'm not bothered by this so much on the inverted version, 6) play around with the placement a bit more--perhaps lower right corner with mouse scampering off over the side, yet i also totally get why you wanted the owl upper left...but then the mouse is a problem! best of luck.
Francesca_heartcore
Francesca_heartcore on Feb 08 '07
Amazing. Reminds me of BMTH. Want it please? Cant wait to buy it, cause it HAS to be printed! Good work! :)))
notpoppies
notpoppies on Feb 08 '07
Truly amazing. A work of art. I like the inversion on the black. They belong out at night. $5
jhl786
   jhl786 on Feb 08 '07
thanks for all the votes and comments. i'll be submitting more some time soon hopefully.
pbelknap
pbelknap on Feb 08 '07
very cool! ditto for the white on black.
letsrocket
letsrocket on Feb 08 '07
I like the placement on the shirt. And the design is lovely--I'd wear this! You get a five. :)
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