that is the way....

I'm just wondering if this is another one of your mega rip-offs. I'll hold my vote until I hear something...

joeG, as you can see by filete01's comment, you're not really creating a good reputation around here. Even if people liked the design, they may not "trust" it.

As far as the shirt goes, I'd redraw that weird smoke/hand formation, making it more clear. I'd also put a hint of the guy's left shoulder and hat brim in there to provide more definition.

I don't know about the rest of you, but i'm not into wearing faces on my shirts.

the smoke looks like a ribcage

id buy if you made the changes

the smoke to fake ... make it more graphic!