Blossom*
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Jan 30 '07
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maybe if it was smaller on the shirt
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I have to save up for all these brill shirts!
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Best on grey!
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smaller on grey! awesome!
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I can do smaller!
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I *have* to have this! I think it's fine the way it is. I like the pink/grey one best. :)
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Parts of her seem out of proportion and that's really bothering my eyes-- her butt seems to begin really far up and be rather large, and the curve of her back and the position of her leg doesn't seem to be able to account for that. There is an indentation that I could only surmise was to be the break between *ah hem* cheeks, but, again, if you follow that line around, her leg should be much thinner and come out higher up. Also, move the bit coming out at her abdomen... it really interrupts her lines and makes her seem bottom heavy.
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SemantiTheft- I see what you're saying. I think she got a bit funky when she was scaled down. That indentation you mentioned is actually the spot where her upper thigh meets her bum, not her butt clevage!! haha Her wings almost blend in with the curve in her back, so she does look rather thick at the moment.. which is something I didn't notice when it was submitted. Thanks for the attention to detail!! :)
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I like it best on the like blue.
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all the combinations works fantastic
great sense of colours, AWESOME design $5 |
2 days later
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great design. i like it on the charcoal t-shirt $5
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I love this design.
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The design is lovely. But it can be improved in terms of the colour if u wanna print it on dark colour shirts. Perhaps you can lighten the colour of the girl (with the wings), ie. to grey? yups :) It'll look real great on the charcoal t-shirt!
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very pretty, love it!
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i like the blue and black one- i love it...except for the same reasons like semantitheft said... that hit realy my eye.
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Not so fond of the red.
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it looks familiar
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Don't center it. But I like the paint splatter.
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White paint splatter and silhouette of feminine shape may be...er...suggestive. This coming from the guy who (inadvertantly) sub'd veggie bukkake.
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Really like the red; like the charcoal but want the girl to be a bit lighter.
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really pretty. the red and dark grey is nice.
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