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Re-submission with clearer type.
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it bothers me a little that each of the "allowances" are capitalized at the beginning of the line when they are not supposed to be.
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"Sell the cat for canvas" at the bottom of the script would give the overall piece more balance.
Very funny though. |
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Huh. Harder to read, yes, but I liked the previous font better...
Also, the :- bothers me...should there be both? Aside from nitpicking, it's a good idea and nice colors. (4) |
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You are a genius! I wore a angora beret and a retarded guy was petting my hat! I love this! I am not sure about the absinthe part though. But add more cliches if only for my amusement! $5!
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I'm French and I'd say you're being too kind. Throw in a couple more cliches and I'll really like it.
If you need help ;) :): |
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Sweet. I don't think you need the hyphen after the colon though. (" ...right to:- ") change to (" ...right to: ")
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