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KISS ME by thelovefanclub

Scoring finished:

576 days ago

Submitted on:

Jan 24 '07

Scored by:

1,972 people

Comments:

45 comments

Final average score:

2.15 out of 5

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by thelovefanclub

My jot sub.

JOT stands for Joy of Text. Brief was to come up with a design based on hand drawn typography.

The flowers are inspired by 'The Australian Gardener's Wildflower Catalogue'

kiss me cause i brought you flowers

Tonteau on Jan 24 '07

Excellent stuff. I'd like it bigger on the shirt. Really big.

thelovefanclub on Jan 24 '07

see it on a shirt

J-Ray on Jan 24 '07

damn that is S_W_E_E_T ... the K is hard to make out, but it's not even important to me that it's legible. nice work.

greenelvish on Jan 24 '07

I LOVE the flower letters, but I wish it said something besides "kiss me". I never buy shirts like that because I'm afraid a scary stranger will actually try it.

enlighten_the_messenger on Jan 24 '07

I don't think anyone would be able to read it unless they already knew what it said...

But I like it.

Monkey II on Jan 24 '07

where are all the comments here? -- great stuff!

tomburns on Jan 24 '07

i like that its hard to read. great collage design! 5

Noobits on Jan 24 '07

the K is hard to see but the design is awesome.

TAZL on Jan 24 '07

LOVE the design! I didn't even realize it was letters, but I still love it.

I'd actually like it more if it wasn't trying to say anything.. but then it wouldn't be in this contest, I guess. ah well.

chelly on Jan 24 '07

a is me - is what i got. i don't mind that it is hard to read, but it would be nice if the entire thing was difficult. regardless, the color is great as is the movement.

hforhello on Jan 24 '07

i like the flowers, but the K doesn't look much like a K

superannie on Jan 24 '07

it's really difficult to read, but the flowers are pretty :)

quietine on Jan 24 '07

i effing love this

donkeyisland on Jan 25 '07

Wow neat

Petanca on Jan 25 '07

I could have never figured out what it says but I'd buy it anyway, would look great on a shirt

SemantiTheft on Jan 25 '07

Neat, but way hard to read.

sparkle.rain on Jan 25 '07

This is GORGEOUS! $5

gamejunkie on Jan 25 '07

amazing detail and color work. 5$

.jl-london. on Jan 25 '07

Love this design, tru the 'k' is hard to make out but it looks great anyway

cheekychappie4 on Jan 25 '07

Awesome

lsmc88 on Jan 25 '07

once you see the words, it is cool, but if I wore it around, people would just think I had a shirt with flowers on it and it would make me look like a fruit. therefore, i give it a 5

lsmc88 on Jan 25 '07

i meant 5 for design, but no $. nice job on the concept tho

se5k on Jan 25 '07

that actually is pretty cool.

itwasa_trick on Jan 25 '07

it looks good but it's very hard to read.

StrayGhostie on Jan 25 '07

oooh, spiffy!

Glumone on Jan 26 '07

I read "diss me" work on that K

welkin25 on Jan 26 '07

wow... i didn't suspect those were letters until i saw that this is a jot submission. awesome design.

circlekat on Jan 26 '07

Great design, different color tee please! $5

Lybarra on Jan 26 '07

I looks pretty, but I can't read it.

planet0fs0und on Jan 26 '07

I have to agree, looks great but hard to see the K

LaMola07 on Jan 26 '07

Love the colors.

ThisWouldBemark on Jan 26 '07

Great execution. I think you've heard enough feedback about the k, but your design is really well done. It's just subtle enough and the art is good enough that it doesn't even matter if people don't pick up on the text. Bravo.

jaylovestheguinness on Jan 27 '07

Nice, not sure i would wear those colours but its a good design

Ste7en on Jan 27 '07

beautiful work, though I tend not to wear brightly colored "kiss me" tees, that doesn't mean I wont give this a 5.

La Femme Chiquita on Jan 27 '07

This is completely unreadable unless you know what it says. I think that defeats the point of it being text.

yelabela on Jan 27 '07

so cool!

Nodus on Jan 27 '07

*insert another comment about the poor K here*

BORN2SHOPLC on Jan 28 '07

I like it being hard to red. I'm not sure if that was the point, so please don't take that offensively. I like it. $5

mosty on Jan 28 '07

I love it!!!! Really really hope this gets printed! wud definately buy!! Like it best on brown backround

nikogrande on Jan 29 '07

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

sbrohrer on Jan 29 '07

if the k were just a little bit clearer (even knowing its there, I cannot see it), I would buy it.

jost on Jan 29 '07

wow, so spinny good

guavawava on Jan 30 '07

If you were going to make any revisions I'd redraw the K. I don't know if if needs it though because it looks good the way it is, just a little hard to read at first.