To breathe (or not to breathe)
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1955 days ago
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Jan 18 '07
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2.64 from 2,242 votes
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i like this one alot. what program do you design in and what tools do you use?
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lose the 'shit' and i'm buyin'! awesome.
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I agree, lose the text.
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I like this one better then the other unerwater scene uou have running...leave the shit...or if not replace it with something like "crap"
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yeah, get rid of shit.
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nice layout
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Nice one, I like that a bit more is going on in this one. Cool
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haa love it.
i would wear it except for the shit part :] |
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yeah, it definitely doesn't need "shit". the bubbles and "sweat" coming off of the diver say it all. love it :)
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awesome, but i i think that it would be funnier without the "shit" ...its kind of overkill , subtley is much funnier
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agreed, no text. great looking scene. awesome squid too
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Haha! I love it!
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Yea, the 'shit' isn't neccesary. Maybe replace with a '!' or just get rid of it. Other than that, I give you a 4.
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no swear words pls
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Get rid of the text but other than that a 5$
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I'd use ! instead of shit.
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don't like the "shit" - subtlety is better, and that makes it too joke-y - - - i'd reposition the diver so he's bending backward (to look up), waving his hands in a "stop! don't do it!" way - to evoke the panic that is "shit" without having to write "shit"
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I agree with using just a ! instead of "shit."
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it's the same as your other one! its just like scooby doo where the background just keps getting recycled.
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I also think it would be better without the text. The picture relays that information.
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Jebs on Jan 19 '07 so THANKS everybody! ok, i listened to you all: here is a version WITHOUT the text: click here or you can see it on my threadless blog... anyway, thankk for your comments and your time, that's appreciated sooo much.
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Nice!
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grayehound on Jan 19 '07 |
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grayehound on Jan 19 '07 |
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grayehound on Jan 19 '07 'course that was done on teetonic.
yours is really well illustrated, and it's a clever idea, but the expletive really does need to go. |
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Jebs on Jan 19 '07 well...sea is sea, water is water, and fishes are fishes no? the comparison stops there, because i don't see other stuffs that are identical...my style, my scene, my point of view...ok, the colors are near. stop. ;-)
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grayehound on Jan 19 '07 I brought it up cuz I thought it'd been printed here. my bad. yours stands on its own very well.
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Jebs on Jan 19 '07 thanks you :-) i said that because, when we make a design, there are always a lot of persons that find out the design is a copy etc... and usually, that's just wrong. i know that you didn't say that, anyway thanks for your time, that's appreciated ;-)
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Is the arc on the sawfishes head supposed to be a smile? I like the design except for that part. It kind of throws me off because their mouths usually look so much different.
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Jebs on Jan 19 '07 yes it is... but i did a version without Shit, without smile, without eyes, because you are not the first to say that ;-) : click here to see a different version
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much better
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Bisparulz on Jan 19 '07 yeh..another 5$
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Jebs on Jan 19 '07 thanks dude! you changed your nickname (poetic lover etc...)?
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yea. The design is so telling and well done that you really don't need the text.
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Yeah, as everyone has said.... Loose the $%*^ and I will buy
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yeah, no shit, haha
i still gave it $5 |
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awesome! it would be great in a PG, R & X version!
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yeah lose the pooooooooo
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how about just an exclamation point?
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yeah put an exclamation point instead.
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perfect without text. 5
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enough underwater people?
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no shit.
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Jebs on Jan 22 '07 ok ok ok, i made a version without the "shit", exclamation is also a good idea, but without text is perfect ;-) too bad on threadless, we can't update the design...if it was printed, i would leave the text ;-)
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I think that you should replace the shit with bubbles. Since you can't talk under water.
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the new one is way cool.
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it reminds me of 'nice swimshorts jimmy' too
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The smile on the sawfish looks too big. Nitpicking I know, but it is a striking shirt, just thought you wanna make it "better"
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like what everyone else is saying...the design speaks for itself to bad you felt like putting in the word
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i just think the "shit" is too strong. Just change it to "crap". Nobody would be offended by that.
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Like everyone else says... remove "shit" and let the graphic speak for itself. 5 with the "shit", $5 with...
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Jebs on Jan 23 '07 thanks everybody! i'm happy to see all those comments, that touche me really!
i repeat that the version without "shit" is here Click here to see the version wihtout shit |
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Jebs on Jan 23 '07 arf, a mistake here: click here
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I would DEFINITELY buy a wordless one.
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Seeing as how you said if printed, you'd leave the text, no go from me, until a resubmit.
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The "Shit!" is incredible I think, as is the shiRt, it rocks!
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I would wear it if "shit" wasn't there. Is there another word you could use maybe, because I do think that adds a lot to the design.
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I'd buy a version WITH the shit, but without the eyes and mouth. It makes it more comical, yes, but it doesn't really fit in with the rest of the style.
Without the text it looks kind of blank, but maybe an exclamation point would work best. |
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i don't think there's anything wrong with "shit" and frankly i find it ludicrous that it's such a huge deal, but whatever. great design.
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Jebs on Jan 24 '07 for the word, it could be "wtf" or "!!!" or "crap" or well, nothing :-) that's hard because everybody want something different...without the eyes and mouth is a tougher version...not sure that people would like it... thanks anyway!
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i like it better than your other one and I agree that you should remove "shit." it gives away the humor of the shirt. its obvious.
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lose the foul language, it's not needed
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loose the text, but otherwise its totally awesome!
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looks great when its that big on the shirt, nice
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...Sorry to add my two cents (for what it's worth) but if you could show it with a !@#$ it would still emphasize the expletive ....either way I would buy - it's awesome
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Ya gotta keep that big smile on the sawfish, that expression is what makes it work so well. Although the original "shit" version made me laugh so loud my dog came in from the next room, the textless version with the exact same art you have linked above is even better. If scoring had not been complete I'd have left you a 5.
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