Hello, im a fan of the medieval age and all of that stuff!! so, here´s my design inspired in William Wallace!!

you might want to clean up the text a bit. i have that font too, and it looks better if you take away some of the flourishes - the overlapping just makes it look messy.

im 50/50 on this. i feel like its not fully developed enough yet.. maybe it is the font as mentioned above.

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hehe, i like medieval stuff too, i would like the knight to be bigger, and the design a LITTLE less elaborate, as mentioned. maybe one other stand out color, like for a flag or something, ya know?

i love medieval times, so this is cute. Elaborate on it a little bit more and it would totally work.

it looks a bit crouded with so much "viney" embellishment on the medieval end. and maybe remove the embellishment from the text a bit to make the letters appear more pronounced.

i adore the detail on your knight. gorgeous!

yeah, i agree with the comments about the design is so simple, mm but thats my style, minimal i mean, but thanks for the comments, i keep in mind for future works
thanks

mmmkay your style may be simple. but think about the subject of your sub here. medieval text and figures. i dont know about others but that usually makes me think of the medieval illuminated manuscripts and stuff. where there is very complex writing, and ornate drawings, and even filler all along the sides. i guess what i'm trying to say is, some people may relate knights and the dark ages with something more ornate.

besides... the picture looks like a LiveTrace of a real picture anyways.

Clean and nice 5!