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Great illustration!!! Maybe you can change the color of the tears to a lighter one, as well as changing the typeface to a more "children's" friendly one.
Good Job!!! |
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i think the tears take away from it...im not sure if its the size or color but i think the earth should be the focal point of the shirt.
maybe just one smaller tear would be more effective? |
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the streaming tears kinda look like war paint...
i agree that a single tear might be better. but it's very rad. |
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Wonderful message. Maybe smaller hands on the child and place them as if the child was holding it close.
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So William Wallace's kid is sad? They may take the earths life, but they can never take it's FREEEEEEEDOOOOOMM!!!!!
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I cannot take this shirt seriously. It's hilarious. I might buy it as a joke for someone, but I can't see anyone seriously wearing this. The art's good, though.
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The boy's hands are too big in proportion, even if you wanted to give perspective with them, thy are too big. The rest is really well drawn, but I think it is a really sad topic to wear all around.
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Excellent concept, great message... 5 but sorry no $ for some reason the crying kid takes away from it for me.
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Excellent concept, great design... 5, but sorry no $ ... for some reason the crying kid sorta takes away from it for me.
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ooooh I forgot the Text isn't really apart of the design it's self, it's just another title... :)................ I meant to address that earlier, I guess it just slipped my mind oops... :)
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Aww damn it. That's all I'm going to say. Especially since I have no designs of my own for people to criticize....
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BEANBOY on Jan 23 '07 So William Wallace's kid is sad? They may take the earths life, but they can never take it's FREEEEEEEDOOOOOMM!!!!!
I seriously almost spit pop all over the monitor just now. |
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