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I assume it's toothpaste..? You should maybe make it more apparant because, at first glance, I thought it was ...um... something ... yeaah...
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Last words of a murdered toothpaste. Neat idea. Maybe more crime scene detail...like a dead tooth brush also dead or a sink crime zone. Or something like "the soap did it" as a quote. 3.
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I think "blame" doesn't sound convincing. My last words would be, "It was the soap," or the "soap did it" like stated above.
I do love the idea. 5. |
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thanks for the coments, this is like the 1.0 version of the design, i liked a lot only the toothpaste in the t-shirt. And yes, the soap kill the toothpaste, but why?
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I think the line should be changed as well...I personally like "the soap did it" more. Otherwise, I love it.
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i prefer "blame the soap."
change the colors on the tube slightly, maybe less highlighting, and it's a $5. |
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