I like this a lot. My only suggestion would be to make the line thicker that represents the right side of his mouth, due to the fact that the inside of his mouth is the same color as the shirt. If that line was a little thicker I think it would be more distinguishable. I'm sorry for that long, awkward explaination by the way. Hope you know what I was trying to say. ;o)
Tonteau: see food... sea food... sea... pirate... theurbanraptor: My first reaction was to move the bit of food at the back of the tongue, because, to me it read "c-seefood." I agree with summerstorm about the mouth line. My only other comment is more of a question: Because of Tonteau's comment, should the word be spelled sea instead of see?
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