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Thats the story of my life right there.
I've always been a peach no matter how much I wish I was a kiwi. Or something. |
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please dont put 5$ at the bottom. i like the shirt but asking for a good score is very unprofesional
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I don't think you need a background, just the color of the shirt is fine... it's cute and for some reason I want to give you a $5... hehe
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nessaChan... not only does it sound better to say "I wish I were", it is proper grammar.
Cute design, but i'd not buy or wear it without the fix. |
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sorry about that.. i guess its because english is not my strong side... since i dont really speak it. it will be fixed. i bet i have some more mistakes with what i just wrote!
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"were" doesn't just sound better, it's correct grammar, as it's subjunctive clause for situations that aren't in fact true (I wish..., If only...)
Very cute. |
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people might wonder "why a peach". but a KIWI wishing he were a peach sounds so much stranger. 5 from me (despite the begging, which btw was kind of lame)
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i think it would be alot better without the text and maybe a group of happy kiwi's, or just the sad peach alone. but it is very cute!
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