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Submitted on:
Dec 21 '06
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2.44 out of 5
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noponies
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by noponies   
Our smaller pieces make us wholes...Please view larger image of the design here
View Larger. Works on sage and black as well..
hksofa3
hksofa3 on Dec 21 '06
i like the design but maybe not so many different swirls on the bird
blueconstance
blueconstance on Dec 21 '06
I LOVE THIS.
LOOOVE.
noponies
   noponies on Dec 21 '06
There is a bigger version in my Blog as well.
oyster_press17
oyster_press17 on Dec 21 '06
I'm in love with this. $5
smongey
smongey on Dec 21 '06
Very Monotone. Im slowly getting depressed looking at it. I like the design but I'd rethink the colours and the nauseating bird pattern if I were you
thenewswansea
thenewswansea on Dec 21 '06
It needs purple, blue and green colour schemes too or it's a lil' depressing.
_Sarah_
_Sarah_ on Dec 21 '06
I really like the swirls on the bird, however, the outline of the bird is not very smooth.
noponies
   noponies on Dec 21 '06
The bird is based off a paper cut out, so it is supposed to look roughly angular.. thats part of the idea, that songs, stories etc are made up of elements that you can sort of, cut and paste together, metaphorically that is...

I'll do some colour options and put them up...
XfollowthebutterfliesX
XfollowthebutterfliesX on Dec 21 '06
I personally love the swirls on the bird.
dperduer
dperduer on Dec 21 '06
I think this is pretty. I would wear it. It would look really nice on the bottom of a shirt on one forward-facing hip of the shirt. The main problem is probably the COLOR (or lack thereof).

MY PROBLEM is the big rectangle in the middle of the bird. It seems too large and out of place and angular among all the lovely swirls. That is probably why the pattern seems "nauseating", because it is disjointed. If you made a more similarly designed rectangle, it would blend more and become one with the bird. : )

Also, what are the 3 tall piles in the water? I don't think those are necessary. They remind me of innapropriate things. : (
dperduer
dperduer on Dec 21 '06
$4 : ) ... (see above comment from me)
monmont
monmont on Dec 21 '06
the three piles look like stacked up stones to me, traditional Japanese garden decorations..
funkie fresh
   funkie fresh on Dec 21 '06
sweet patterns
g-regulate
   g-regulate on Dec 21 '06
lovely work! a mix of styles but they fit together really well
tofurky
tofurky on Dec 21 '06
awesome idea but i think the crane should be a little more rounded.
Answerthatandstayfashionable
oh my goodness! I love it! 555$$$
jstumpenhorst
   jstumpenhorst on Dec 21 '06
great work noponies. i like that you changed the rocks! $5
applestar
applestar on Dec 21 '06
i love this... i don't think it's depressing. just pretty. $5
applestar
applestar on Dec 21 '06
i love this... i don't think it's depressing. just pretty. $5
hforhello
hforhello on Dec 21 '06
it's lovely! $5
archbar
archbar on Dec 21 '06
Wow, I love the textures. 5$
HollyG
HollyG on Dec 21 '06
Absolutely beautiful. Keep it as it is!
lesquelette
lesquelette on Dec 21 '06
Agree absolutely with the above. Great work.
herky
   herky on Dec 22 '06
great patterns and line work
Thievery
Thievery on Dec 22 '06
this is gorgeous! best sub ever
$5
Calm Yourself
Calm Yourself on Dec 22 '06
Aside from a couple phallic branches, good work and great detail.
pickledbib
pickledbib on Dec 22 '06
I like the pattern work
Ian Leino
   Ian Leino on Dec 22 '06
Inspired patterning, and great stylistic contrast between the complexity of the bird, and the simple clean lines of the setting.
lemonalle
lemonalle on Dec 22 '06
Pretty!
Raid71
   Raid71 on Dec 22 '06
great patterns
ekaj47
ekaj47 on Dec 22 '06
nice
tomburns
   tomburns on Dec 22 '06
damn, that is badass 5
Ste7en
   Ste7en on Dec 23 '06
great line work
Gdub
Gdub on Dec 24 '06
That is amazing. I love it!
blinked
blinked on Dec 24 '06
I love it!
Pseudonymity
Pseudonymity on Dec 24 '06
i am a fan of linework
someimes it doesn't need any colour at all
awesomeness i give this a 5 + $
Crazy_Cat_Gal
Crazy_Cat_Gal on Dec 25 '06
Very nice!
Seadogz
Seadogz on Dec 26 '06
i love it's complexity. nice job
that5kid
that5kid on Dec 26 '06
i like the bird a lot- w/o the (bonsai?) tree/water.
chiyeko
chiyeko on Dec 26 '06
it's a little clip-arty for me, but the idea is really cool. good luck!
andalusia
andalusia on Dec 26 '06
i adore the bird. i don't know that it needs the tree etc. but i love it and would gladly buy it as is.
Pokarose
Pokarose on Dec 27 '06
This is so creative and origanal. I love it a lot.
You should put it on a bright color shirt as well...
Like the light blue?
victimofopportunity
victimofopportunity on Dec 27 '06
amazingly amazing $5
mezo
   mezo on Dec 28 '06
Crane patterns are the new black! Awesome!! 5$
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