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i like the pin-up feel of this, but its just too simple.
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I'm not real crazy about the lineart for the girl... I honestly think this could be pulled off much better.
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i love the pi-up obviously but this is almost an insult you need detail and give her a damn face. Very good start - but you need to finish it.
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and she is looking a little marilyn so her boobs need to be bigger and did you know that Marilyn Monroe at the height of her career wore a size 16 - that is a plus size now a days.
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i think size 16 in Marilyn's day has turned into 8/10 of today's sizes. If you've ever gone vintage clothes shopping you'll notice the sizes are drastically different!
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