this is my very first attempt at a t-shirt design and using illustrator... i hope you all like it! if not, give me feed back on what i could do better! thank you!

I think you have the start of something... my opinion on these sorts of styles is that if you're going to do that much, go all the way with it. Right now you have some colored straight lines... why not repeat them somewhere else in the design to have it look more cohesive? Same with all of the other little elements. Try using a little bit of repetition. The colors are nice though!

I love it... I would buy it. I think the rings throw it off a bit. The lines may also be a bit heavy compared to the other elements. The colors are great and this still deserves a $5.

I agree. Great colors, and the stripes may look nice if repeated in the background with a lighter transparency.

agreed with all of the above.

i think the design is gorgeouss, nicely done 5$

I love this design. I really hope it gets printed $5

I really like this design, I'd def. buy this shirt. $5

the stripes at the bottom left just doesn't fit with the rest of the picture, otherwise, i think it looks great.

great colour choise! 5

i really like everything except that the two rings are the same, just rotated...

i love everything about it! 5

thanks everyone for being kind... i'm learning and take all of your advice. so far i've gotten a better response than i thought... so thank you!

I agree with Frekinscnoth. Good design, just a little too busy.

color scheme is perfect! i find the stripes leapt out too much and kinda disrupts the gracefulness of the design being so sharp

hey sweet ace design goin here! I love it and the colors are prestine!

Nice! $5

pretty... i like it. $5

this one is a keeper!

cool stuff

um, i like the colors and the design... the lines do pop out a bit.

The colors are AMAZING. 5 just for that alone.

its beautiful i'd buy it was it is.

emmmm....i meant "as it is", please excuse me its very early!

Very unique design, Love it!

thank you everyone! this really encourages me to learn illustrator even more(even though i can't stand that darn pen tool) and make more tees!

Like the colors :)

I really like the graphics and the sort of indie look the picture gives, and who doesn't love giraffes? I'd buy it.

Hey I love it! Keep up the creative juices!!

looks like a potential LRG t-shirt

no

this is a great shirt. out of the 600+ i've graded, this is like one of five that i'd actually purchase.

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i hope you read this, i would really like to see the design expanded, then stretched across the chest area. i love the colors and the design. i just think it would be stronger up there.

I like it. It is a little buisy but not to much I think. I'll get angela to score it. It actually looks simular to a shirt she got from San Fran. I like it. Well done! 5's all around!

this has gorgeous colors. nicely done.

Colors are great and the design is really cool. For some reason I'm not totally digging the stripes, but other than that it's an awesome design.

i think you did great. i would buy it.

thanks everyone! i had fun and all of your encouragement really helped!

I think it looks pretty awesome.

I want it. =\