My first attempt. I love criticism. Please feel free to tell me what you don't like about it, I want to improve. Thanks!

what's this all about?

It's not about anything. The guy just totaled his bike by running into a street lamp. It's simply an image that came to me when I was doodling. Nothing more.

i want you to win just so i can wear this to terry's. oh, and so i can say my friend is a t-shirt designer. awesome!

The text on the window that say Terry's really bugs me and I dont know why....

I think its like...not rounded enough. or something I dont know. I just really dislike it.

Nice design though. If the text in that window was different I'd say 4 =)

That could be done. I'm still not sure if text even belongs there, but it seems stranger without it.

I agree more scribby not so refined.

yea.. i dont like how the text is so fonted... otherwise i cool design.. but honestly dont see it as a shirt.

I echo the other critiques. I don't see it as a t-shirt. Did he run into the very top of the light post? If so, I don't think he'd just be sitting there.

I like it. It's simple.

I wasn't going for realism. I've never seen a lightpost do that before. Would it help if it wasn't pretzled? That's what made it stick out in my mind. I'm happy to hear ideas. As I look at it, I think it would be better with shadows...

Okay here's my idea, and I'm no designer. Maybe use another font for Terry's & put like an awning or something over it, just to kind of finish off the top. I like the shadows idea too, I don't know. I can see this being a really cool design wih a little work, and maybe not even the things I've said, those were just my ideas. I give it a 4 for now, I think it will be aweome later.