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the thoughts which inhabit my mind
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cool, i think that instead of going up, the "thoughts" should be going down, so that the man is on your shoulder/chest and the drawing itself is more understandable
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i think the placement is fine. Fire looks cooler going up i think. But it is kind of hard to make out.
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Placement is prefect... if it went down it would look like magnificantly magical vomit. WELL DONE!!!
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nice illustration skills. a single color or two might punch it up, but I'd be worried about too much color masking the talent itself.
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i like it, but it took me a few seconds to realize all of that was coming out of the man's mouth.
maybeyou can fix that? i dunno, but i do like the way it is! |
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gorgeous. does your likelihood of adding color increase exponentially based on the amount of people who say it?
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