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Can be used on some other shirt colors.
AmorEstVitaeEssentia
AmorEstVitaeEssentia on Dec 18 '06
I like it, but centered would be better.
pavlovlore
pavlovlore on Dec 18 '06
whateva
snowdwarf
snowdwarf on Dec 18 '06
cool
letmenatalya
letmenatalya on Dec 18 '06
i dunno. also, ex-girlfriend's
tigrre
tigrre on Dec 18 '06
well the girlfriend part eliminates gay men and straight women from buying the shirt
hforhello
hforhello on Dec 18 '06
If you wanted to make it more accessible to everyone (re: tigrre's comment) you could just use "my ex's" and i guess instead of "my girlfriend's" you could use "my best friend's" or something like that. Just an idea.. but it's your design!
Cekoz
Cekoz on Dec 18 '06
I think it would break it up a little and make it more visually interesting if you made the keychain clip thing a different color.
mrdeadhead
mrdeadhead on Dec 19 '06
i'd leave it blank so people can fill in what they want. that way it works for guys, girls, orphans, felons, janitors, non-drivers, immigrants, etc, etc.
skawlastone
skawlastone on Dec 19 '06
you could make it more philosophical....

my mind, my heart, my soul, etc
AzrimEkim
AzrimEkim on Dec 19 '06
What Cekoz said. Also, You've got five colors to work with, so if the clip were one color, and the outline another, that gives you three colors to dispurse throughout the actual keys. It would make a HUGE difference.
Aerial 972
Aerial 972 on Dec 19 '06
cute as hell. id go for the lower left. and, if you should color the chain, maybe red and blue? or purple and black?
million_dead_dash
million_dead_dash on Dec 19 '06
this is really good work, 5
K-Swizz
K-Swizz on Dec 19 '06
I like this
taylortot
taylortot on Dec 19 '06
it kind of looks like "my secret drawer" and "dad's car" are going to the same key
ophelia_moonstone
ophelia_moonstone on Dec 19 '06
sweet....
strawbfondue
strawbfondue on Dec 19 '06
this is a great idea!
quietine
quietine on Dec 19 '06
like it centered over the heart
helo
helo on Dec 19 '06
The concept has more potential to tap into (meaning you could add some more interesting/funny labels for some of the keys). The line weight of the keys seems thin and frail. Some of the keys have tips that resemble box cutters rather than keys.
clo.
clo. on Dec 19 '06
lower left
alaskajohn
alaskajohn on Dec 19 '06
great idea...
danniisupernova
danniisupernova on Dec 19 '06
I'd buy this if it said x-boyfriends
SunBaibee
SunBaibee on Dec 20 '06
The concept is great, but the illustration itself needs more depth. More colours, shading, and maybe try making it appear more three-dimensional. I like that "I don't know" label, since that's the majority of my keys =P.
sugarkitten
sugarkitten on Dec 20 '06
I have 4 keychains ( a virgin mary, a rape whistle just in case to name 2) and 3 keys so I can not relate - add keychains they are more fun and maybe invest in those key indicators that are diffrent colors
rachel_ksy
rachel_ksy on Dec 20 '06
nice, but i would prefer it on white.
lemonadefish
lemonadefish on Dec 20 '06
I agree with several other comments -- for the labels, just a gender-neutral "my ex's", and add some wierd ones like "space ship" or "tour bus" or "my heart". Also, colors would be great!
samanthaflute
samanthaflute on Dec 20 '06
I defintly think it needs to work for both genders.
Rainn
Rainn on Dec 20 '06
Leave out all the "my"s.
FreedomHangsLikeHeaven
FreedomHangsLikeHeaven on Dec 20 '06
oh oh oh. i have a key that's shaped just like "my girlfriend's" and i always say i don't know, but it's pretty. [and that's exactly what my keys look like too: a million of them.]
bread_and_jam
bread_and_jam on Dec 20 '06
Maybe eliminate one "I don't know" so that you have space for another label
bhoomika
bhoomika on Dec 20 '06
haha! I love this idea! I am one of those people who has like tons of keys and different key chains. Actually had 2 keys from my old car and old apartment.
yellowbird_love
yellowbird_love on Dec 20 '06
I dont mind it saying ex=girlfriends and im a girl.
rachel_whitener
rachel_whitener on Dec 21 '06
needs to be universal
Deadline Wasted
Deadline Wasted on Dec 21 '06
haha, good idea i like it, but maybe thinking about a more flashing color for the keys..... otherwise i'd buy it! 5
quaycur
quaycur on Dec 21 '06
nope
kayceislost
kayceislost on Dec 21 '06
that looks like my key chain.
HollyG
HollyG on Dec 21 '06
Sweet!
mukai
mukai on Dec 21 '06
you should add more labels. and really random things. but that's just me.
michelloness
michelloness on Dec 22 '06
haha looks like my set of keys. especially the i don't know one. But yes, you should make the keys to something...else.
AFriendlyMonster
AFriendlyMonster on Dec 22 '06
I love this. I think the gender neutral is good but I'm a girl and I'd still buy it if it said "my girlfriend's" $5
fiddlywink46
fiddlywink46 on Dec 22 '06
cool! but not on white =|
bhoomika
bhoomika on Dec 23 '06
instead of naming it girlfriend... how about just saying - " My ex's" and " My other half" or something like that...
JanVic
JanVic on Dec 23 '06
you can say '' ex's '' instead of ex-girlfriend so gays can buy it as well :)
i love the concept though,i think centred is best :) white's a bit too plain,try red,i'd like it in red i think. :)
JanVic
JanVic on Dec 23 '06
oh instead of saying girlfriend, you could say '' partner 's '' instead :)
bitq04
bitq04 on Dec 23 '06
girlfriend?! ugh. sexist. ;) maybe you should just change it to "ex's place"...and then something else for...i dunno! whateva.
Koki
Koki on Dec 24 '06
add color and there you go :D
akadyke
akadyke on Dec 24 '06
i like.
zuluyo
zuluyo on Dec 24 '06
I agree with the ex thing and maybe my lover or something instead of girlfriend. I like the idea but I don't know, something about the placement or those straight lines is bugging...
iamsocool
iamsocool on Dec 24 '06
I love it, But Im not a lesbian.
nxmq
nxmq on Dec 24 '06
I like the idea of leaving the labels blank for people to write their own on them...develop the keys, wack it on the bottom left and open your pocket for the money to roll in
ari.patrick
ari.patrick on Dec 24 '06
I like the placement as is.
I like the labels.
I think a different version with just blanks would be interesting.
evilmishie
evilmishie on Dec 25 '06
what bread_and_jam said, and also lemonadefish. i like the "my heart" idea

more colours, too! :D nice idea though. (:
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