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i really really like it
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Love the text on the front, hate the hate. Maybe if the heart was in grayscale, too?
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i love this! Othello is an amazing play!
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I love the front, and hate the heart. Maybe if you put it into grayscale, too, it wouldn't be so jarring.
Lovely design though. $5 |
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Nice concept! 5
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I like it. All of it. Heart included. A 5.
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Yes, $5'ed.
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E-M-O.
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dude, it's Othello, it's not emo, just because TBS and other bands took the phrase and used it for their music doesn't make it emo, this is classical literature
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I love it, the quote is awesome...but part of the reason I want it so bad is because I have a heart tattooed on my wrist, so I always wear my heart on my sleeve =)
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SCORE: 4
I'm a sucker for your design simply because I'm a sucker for Othello and all of Shakespeare's works. It's an excellent and clever design. Nice work. |
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I adore Othello and I soso like this design. 4$
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ooooo, i love this one
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HOLY, THIS IS AN ASWOME DESIGHN!!!!
love it all, 555$$$ |
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HELL YES IT IS LITERATURE,
and by the way TBS SUCKS MONKEY ____________, and what the hell is up with ppl and not likeing EMO!!! |
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i hope this shirt wins, i want it NOW!!!
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YES! $5
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I LOVE THIS.
its freaking beautiful. well done my friend. WELL DONE. |
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Love it
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Othelloooo
*love* |
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not a fan of center aligned text or the paintbrush tool.
that said, if you boost the quantity of gray (used in the background text) this would be pretty good |
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I'd have to say that I would wear this. I love it. :)
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Shakespeare wins. Always.
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love love love love.
this better get printed. |
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I'd definitly get that!!! $5
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that's dope
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I LOVE HOW SOME IDIOT JUST CALLED SHAKESPEARE EMO.
Actually, I don't love it. I just think they're stupid. ]: I like this. I love Shakespeare. |
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Greyscale heart, definitely.
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this is a BEAUTIFUL shirt! I WANT IT!
there should definitely be more shakespeare shirts on threadless. Shakespear |
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shakespeare is not f-ing emo... good lord...
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awesome, 5
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omg, i love this shirt. i like the heart on the sleeve. =)
i don't like shakespeare, but i like that line. ^^ hope it gets printed! |
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GOD I love Shakespeare. Print this, please please please.
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I love this shirt! I would definately wear this!
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*heart*
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oh my freakin' god.
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I'm not crazy about the font (although that's just me...I don't really 'do' serif fonts for some reason), but I love the design. Really love it. $5.
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oh wow thats great. 5$
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Heh. Shakespere is way emo.
......O_o 5$! |
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I didn't know this was up for scoring! I was going to change a few things and resub it. I still might.
The mistake I made was not making all the I's capital.. but I was thinking of taking the main section of text that you can read and writing it out in cursive and then resubbing it. What do you think? |
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that reminds me... the other mistake I made in the sub was the text in the first comment you read... it's meant to be a different section of text posted as the first comment on here. Threadless didn't get to it in time to take it out of the running.
I really want to change the text to cursive so it looks more like a handwritten letter, the font in the back would be as it is. The text it was taken from and exactly what's on the shirt is this: " Do themselves homage: these fellows have some soul; And such a one do I profess myself. For, sir, It is as sure as you are Roderigo, Were I the Moor, I would not be Iago: In following him, I follow but myself; Heaven is my judge, not I for love and duty, But seeming so, for my peculiar end: For when my outward action doth demonstrate The native act and figure of my heart In compliment extern, 'tis not long after But I will wear my heart upon my sleeve For daws to peck at: I am not what I am." |
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Coool... I'm a sucker for Shakespeare!
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Love it, I agree with the heart being a little too jarring. As well would love it if instead of writting "shakespeare" you would write it as "Othello Act...Scene..."
But with this in mind would still buy it |
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that's a good idea too Canuck.
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Good job. I think I would like the heart better if it were further up on the sleeve, but it really doesn't matter, I like it anyway. =)
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I did a few other options...
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I really like either they grey or the red heart. Both look good =)
I really want this. $5 |
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Love it. Want it. Make it for me...
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illustratorbrushswatcheswhat?
try out using actual sumi ink no no no cursive or chancery. garamond or baskerville old face. just something aside from times. new red heart is better |
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Please print this.... I so want this in a long sleeve shirt..... $5
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love the red heart, not the script version
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i like the idea...but a different heart would be sweet
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It gives me chills, baby it is that good! Very well done - i likethe heart too. this would also look good on red and I request that! - - - -The term wear my heart on my sleeve is a very old term - so the emo debate is once again another tiring thing. What is wrong with emo? and emotion? Shakespeare seemed to like it?
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A+ love love love.
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this is so awwwesome.
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I really like it, I approve of the red heart and cursive writing. I think writing "othello act __ scene __" would be more artistic than just shakespeare, but I love and really, really want this shirt.
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uh...melodrama.
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That's really great! I hope this gets printed!
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I would prefer the heart on the top of the sleeve, rather than on the wrist--that way it could be short sleeved, too.
I would also probably move the main design higher up towards the right shoulder. The text is good in any font, I think, as long as you can read it easily. But I absolutely LOVE this shirt. I like the red heart, too. I LIKE the fact that it's jarring. It's artistic and catching. |
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Oh, you've totally won over the lit geek in me. I $5-ed this, but I'd like the design higher up on the shoulder too- it'd be hard to read on my bod otherwise. I like the red heart! Nice work.
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this is nice!
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and i'd love the heart in the "shoulder tattoo" placement:)
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I can't say I've ever had a littlem comment before on a design, sweet!
seriously - thank you for the feedback! If this gets printed I'm going to do the suggestions you've mentioned. I like the heart on the detailed version in my blog a lot better too. Any preference on the font vs. cursive? |
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i love othello, great job, and i like the heart on the sleeve, and it looks good in red. i would most def. buy this. $5
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I HATE IAGO . so much more than anything in the world. but i would buy this just to show my english teacher. lol :)
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i love this disign.
i love shakespeare too. i even more love the writing. this needs to get printed!!! |
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This design does not pay homage to a Shakespearian quotation of such weight, too slap-dashed punk rock in a nice try
cosi-cosi |
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if the sleeve was shorter and the heart higher up i'd get it! :D it's great though :) 5$
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im really not a shakespeare fan...
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dude its so emo HAHAAHA props 5$ check please
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too emo, 'n' the heart eludes to the Smashing Pumpkins...Billy Corgan isn't emo. He doesn't even have hair.
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Oh, and the text may not be emo, but the style in which it is presented is emo.
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I really wish it was on a short sleeve shirt, and the heart was integrated a little better, but great idea,
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fantastic concept, and i love the fact that you are utilizing the long sleeve. Sahweet.
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i've wanted a shirt with this concept for the longest time. im so glad someone finally made one =)
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I love the concept...and I'm a huge sucker for Shakespeare as well. hope it gets printed!
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Gorgeous.
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thank you all for the nice comments and the score :)
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bananaphone on Jan 19 '07 nice work cashing in on the shakespear vote.
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kids even know who shakespear is anymore?
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shakespear? Is that ipear's brother?
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i believe so
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so usually i read through everyone else's replies, then add my two cents...couldn't wait this time,...this is phenominal! i love it,absolutely 5$ and i don't even buy stuff online normally.
one suggestion though - that line always made me think a little higher up on the sleeve, like it might have slipped down from the shoulder, a place where the whole world can see it... like on the side of the upper arm rather than down by the cuff. |
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i also just noticed that scoring was completed ages ago...anyone know what happened to it?
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it was never picked as a print sadly :(
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It should have been!!!!! It was fantastic!
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Seriously, this is possibly one of the best designs I've seen on threadless (not insulting other designers btw, most of you guys are amazing).
I found this t-shirt because I thought I had a great idea for a design, but before I messed around with creating one, I did a quick google search for "heart on my sleeve, threadless" and this, along with a couple of others, came up. I like to think my attempt could have beaten the other two, but the execusion of this design is amazing. I like it the way it is aswell, the cursive is unnecessary, its perfect as is. |
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Ok, so don't know why I'm still commenting on a t-shirt that hasn't been printed, and that was subbed a year ago, but still, if you go in to business producing this t-shirt, can you put the heart on the upper arm like someone else mentioned...
oh... and if you do produce it... could you tell me about it as well so I can buy one. Hell, I'd buy 7, one for every day. |
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"Forsooth, a great arithmetician,
One Michael Cassio, a Florentine,
A fellow almost damn'd in a fair wife;
That never set a squadron in the field,
Nor the division of a battle knows
More than a spinster; unless the bookish theoric,
Wherein the toged consuls can propose
As masterly as he: mere prattle, without practise,
Is all his soldiership. But he, sir, had the election:
And I, of whom his eyes had seen the proof
At Rhodes, at Cyprus and on other grounds
Christian and heathen, must be be-lee'd and calm'd
By debitor and creditor: this counter-caster,
He, in good time, must his lieutenant be,
And I--God bless the mark!--his Moorship's ancient."