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Yeah, everybody saying lose the text is being a hater.
I don't see how this would work without text. |
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It needs the text to work. However, am not a fan of the colour scheme. I know it's riffing on the USSR flag, but something about just yellow on red...not my thing. 4 for now.
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1. Yellow on red; it's more like the Communist flag (even though you're showing the OTHER Marx)
2. Keep the text 3. Fill the text in to make solid letters |
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seems like somethings missing... or that the simple shapes make it too simple... maybe give it some texture or distress it or something... make it seem more complicated.
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Yeah, that Groucho, what an autocrat. He ruled the world of comedy with an iron fist. His dying wish was to send Lenny Bruce to the Gulag he constructed in the Apollo Theatre. |
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