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flamespawned
flamespawned on Dec 14 '06
The message here isn't obvious, although its got to do with violence and warfare clearly. The cycle is a little interesting, but there is no obvious connection to the recycling symbol. Using patriotic colors too is interesting, but confuses the point even further.
hforhello
hforhello on Dec 14 '06
guns to swords.. to bombs? am i reading it right?
hugtrees
hugtrees on Dec 14 '06
You're right about it being unclear. Sorry, but I wouldn't wear something I don't understand myself. I was hoping for a more earth loving type or some conservation msg but it turns out to be something about something a bit more 'bloody'. Maybe not my thing but might be someone else's :)
amenonine
amenonine on Dec 14 '06
clever
ohcursive
ohcursive on Dec 15 '06
I interpret this shirt as "violence breeds violence". I think it's a witty concept.
crackersinmyshoe
crackersinmyshoe on Dec 15 '06
could have been executed better..i think..
Mantis25
Mantis25 on Dec 15 '06
violence recycling. kinda I guess. Good illustrative style. The message is unclear, although I really want it to say something...and not have R/W/B...and not be on yellow....and....


sorry lofty.....so close, yet kinda obscure.
lofty softy
   lofty softy on Dec 15 '06
thanks, i appreciate the comments, i was worried that it would be unclear and also worried that it being red, white and blue would make people think that this was supposed to be about the United States, but ohcursive had it right, it's just saying 'violence makes violence' while playing on the recycle arrows that we're all pretty well acquainted with. as far as the r/w/b goes, i just enjoy primary colors. i hear "more clarity" all the way. again, thanks for the comments.
byteme84
byteme84 on Dec 15 '06
interesting.. not very clear, would need your explaination but still, interesing, very interesting
resistealeau
resistealeau on Dec 15 '06
wow, i understood it perfectly right away. stupids! i appreciate it. i think the gun and sword should be switched so that it's sword- gun- bomb- sword. i don't know if you care, but it reminds me of something i read recently by... uh... i think einstein, where he said something like "i don't know what world war three will be fought with, but wwIV will be fought with sticks and stones", commenting on nuclear war and ... i just wrote a paper on this. i'll come back and talk more at not 3 am.
AzrimEkim
AzrimEkim on Dec 15 '06
Looks awesome except for the shirt color. I'd go with black or grey, just something neutral.
bananaphone
   bananaphone on Dec 15 '06
i think its well done but your cycle is out of whack, like resist said.
quantumlemur
quantumlemur on Dec 15 '06
It took looking at it for a couple seconds, but once I realized what the arrows were, I thought the message was perfectly clear. Great shirt!
thatcrazywyles
thatcrazywyles on Dec 15 '06
fantastic
adartse
adartse on Dec 15 '06
i really like this. and i agree with the rest...no yellow.
crowlz11
crowlz11 on Dec 15 '06
i'd like it better if it went sword, gun, missle
tofurky
tofurky on Dec 15 '06
nice concept
lofty softy
   lofty softy on Dec 15 '06
Thanks again for the comments. here is a version that goes knife/gun/missile with more neutral colors. let me know what you think. thanks everyone. http://www.threadless.com/profile/412363/lofty_softy/blog/96180/New_Versions_of_the_Vicious_Cycle_design
JobotDaRobot
JobotDaRobot on Dec 15 '06
I think it's blatantly clear. Nicely done.
JobotDaRobot
JobotDaRobot on Dec 15 '06
ps: Agree with resist.
thewaffler
thewaffler on Dec 15 '06
"an interesting game. the only way to win is not to play."
lhercher
lhercher on Dec 15 '06
This is really creative. I think I wouldn't have understood your point, however, without reading the title - at least not right away. It's really interesting, though I think people might get wrapped up in the recycle symbol and think you are making a statement about recycling being... violent?? Which makes no sense. But that won't stop people from thinking it. Anyway, 4 for creativity!
FRICKINAWESOME
FRICKINAWESOME on Dec 16 '06
Really neato concept, and like everyone already said, sword-gun-bomb. I think the bomb needs to be a bit more "bomblike" in its appearance- the textures for the sword and gun are excellent, but i thought the bomb was a bullet at first glance (well many glances later actually). Maybe more of a warhead tipped feel and defintely a more missle-like bottom to the drawing should clear this up and make a really good addition to Threadless. A really steller commentary and excellent use of the Recycle signal. Please re-submit and it should be a winner here. I'm still 4'ing and $'ing based on the awesomeness that you will make this become.
L337Cthulhu
L337Cthulhu on Dec 16 '06
I like the concept. I'd have to say though, as much as I hate text, I think it might be necessary here, something simple like the title either below it or on the back.
Kayree
Kayree on Dec 17 '06
interesting..
.onion
.onion on Dec 17 '06
Very interesting...
jaz999
jaz999 on Dec 17 '06
I think you've hit the nail perfectly on the head. I also was surprised there are people who just don't get it... but then, would George "get it"?
I like the neutral colours better than the yellow and the sword gun bomb order. The grey (or blue, watev), white and red work fine... and all those patriots are all so touchy.
$5$5$5$5$5$5$5$5$5 I really hope this makes it.
callmejonah
callmejonah on Dec 17 '06
i got it right off. i think its a clever idea. don't think i'd wear it though.
mrdeadhead
mrdeadhead on Dec 17 '06
myea it's a lil hazy. maybe just a bullet would work better then the actual gun. more of the shape you're going for anyways.
HeplerOnline
HeplerOnline on Dec 18 '06
Love it.
Latholeu Mason
Latholeu Mason on Dec 18 '06
Like it but don't understand.
jillypilly
jillypilly on Dec 18 '06
great concept. it took me a minute to figure out each peice of it, but i really like it otherwise.
benquirkten
benquirkten on Dec 20 '06
i like it withought the blood on the knife
jimmytan
   jimmytan on Dec 20 '06
good idea ^^ like it
sugarkitten
sugarkitten on Dec 20 '06
Great concept - violence begets violence, eye for an eye makes the whole world blind and all that - and this is visualized uniquely.
xXtrajicKittiXx
xXtrajicKittiXx on Dec 20 '06
I really like it! I think the message is clear, when you start a war all you get is more war....
lofty softy
   lofty softy on Dec 21 '06
thanks for the comments and ideas everyone!
Frekinscnoth
Frekinscnoth on Dec 21 '06
interesting message with your design
the marvy pancreas
the marvy pancreas on Dec 21 '06
but...recycling is a good thing.
Touchtonne
Touchtonne on Dec 21 '06
I think it is a message of peace, like violence only brings more violence. So what if it is unclear, I dont think it is at all, it lets people interpret it. Patriotic colors are good, since nationalism brought on WWI and all that jazz. The color scheme is a little awkward, it doesn't look good on yellow to me. I'm glad other people have longer comments.
reetzy_chick
reetzy_chick on Dec 21 '06
I really like this...and ya...switch the order like the one comment said. $5 once the order is switched.
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