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the text is what the design is all about, but I don't like the text.
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I love the idea and design, but what the text is saying really rubs me the wrong way. The sentiment behind it is cool, but for some reason, the wording feels off.
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I tend to agree - I like everything but the text. Feels like it needs to be 'let's go home' or 'wanna get a pizza?' or something more subtle than just 'it sucks'. and smaller.
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great :D but yeah, make the text more subtle - we can all see it's the moon, something along the lines of "wanna go to my place" ^.^ or like (babag said it) "this sucks"
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INCREDIBLE and i really like the text change idea of just "This sucks" hahaha i would where that definitely
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funny idea. but the design is weak. clean up the type and the illustration and you might have something.
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I think the design itself is quite good. The humor could be just a tiny bit more subtle, however. Read the rest of my thoughts here: http://www.lovesthreadless.com/2006/12/17/the-moon-sucks-submission-verdict-4/
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Sweeeeeeeeet design. I would buy this if the speech bubble was more circular and the font was different, maybe smaller.
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