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sick,...you should try making the bubbles and birds a different color from the background. i would probably buy it if you did that. dope man.
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hahaha, i think you should have them saying random emo/"scene" things like "OMGZZZ THAT'S SO HAWTSEXX" or uh, whatever they say =P
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if you keep the text bubbles then cut them down to maybe 5 or 6, not all the way up the shirt. cool birds!
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more line quality!
thicker and the illusion of volume would be awesome. thin lines like this make it look kind of weak nice idea though! |
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I think you should keep the text bubbles, but have fewer of them, like mawleogs said. I really like the concept!
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Love those birds =) I'd wear the shirt just for them. They look like my mom's two birds. Really cool how just their...crests and spots (or w/e :P ) are colored. =)
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i love he birds. i think it'd look better with a hand-written font though! much better actually. but your idea is ever so nice!
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ok, so far this is the best so far. I've rated too many curvy desings of balloons and clouds and random things.
and i like this a lot 4 |
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i like the overall idea but i dont like the thoughts in the bubbles and there ARE a lot of bubbles =cO
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interesting, but the yellow stands out way too much, takes away from the rest of the things going on in the design.
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birds are well drawn, but i immediately thought of exotica, which has already been printed.
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thanks everyone for the comments, definitely gave me some things to think about for my next one. Cheerio~
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