|
i wouldn't wear this.
|
|
The skull and text in the blue box is a shirt all on it's own. And I would def buy it. Lose the rest of it and resubmit.
|
|
Yeah, cool style, but simplify the shirt a bit. I also think the eagle would work on its own as a shirt.
|
|
a bit too busy, but wonderfully biting. i'd wear it if it was toned down a little. maybe no vertical black stripes?
|
|
You're also kinda missing the whole "fast food" theme here, with the possible exception of the text (which also feels awkward here).
|
|
shouldnt the design tell the story and not the paragraph of obvious words you have strung together to get an overdone messege across? sorry, but no.
|