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There's waaaay too much going on in this design. I'd try to simplify it more, and focus in on the message you're trying to send.
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i think if it was simplified it would look better, but that's just my opinion. good luck tho. (does n.b. stand for nota bene?)
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I dont mind the business... your eye goes where it's supposed to first, and then has something else to look at. Keeps the T from getting old fast.
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^ sorry, didn't read carefully. I count 6, looking at the chart. and i don't know how many people would want to wear a fat naked kid on their shirt, even as a statement.
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Wasnt expecting to score highly, but thats brutal! Lol thanks anyway. Ill be back with some 5$'s for you to click next time!
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oh, my bad. i assumed you would either have a hospital gown or, uh, nothing. hope you do better next time. :]
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