I'm confused... what exactly are the floorboard-looking things in the background?

floorboards, I'd wager.

save the snow crane!

Wow. 5.

I thought this line was in The Crane Wife 2, not The Island. Whatever, I like the elegant simplicity. 4

what does the title mean?

maybe get rid of the floorboards? something about their line-sketchiness and the crane's relative solidity looks off...

The title is oart o f the Crane wife 2. From looking at other entries I was thinking this contest was for the CD as a whole. I am willing to take out the floor boards.

i do actually like the floorboards. this design is intriguing...

this shirt is magic

I like it.

no i like the floorboards..kind of a cool contrast in design type to the crane

keep the floor boards, it grounds the crane in reality.

maybe just take the lines off the outtermost edges of the outside floorboards.. making it seem less like a small section of floorboards.. unless that's what you were going for. Also, the curviness of the floorboards makes it look like they slant inward, like a wide canoe or something.. again, could be what you're going for.. and I completely understand not wanting to make the boards rigidly straight.
oh, nice btw.

i also thought maybe take out the lines of the outer edges

hmm...odd but i like this a lot..nice job

I like this, but it's TOO Carson. You're not meant to imitate!

what's with the floor boards

The story I'm guessing this is based on is that saddest story ever. I started tearing up when I saw the picture. 5. Sorry wouldn't be able to bring myself to wear it.

Who is Carson?

What's the saddest story ever? Nevertheless, I love love love the shirt. Five.