Threadless T-Shirts - Song Birds

Song Birds by pataskala27

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662 days ago

Submitted on:

Dec 14 '06

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2,842 people

Comments:

44 comments

Final average score:

2.39 out of 5

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Just a a crazy design I came up with that will help me along the path to designing greatness!

philisme on Dec 14 '06

Contrast and shapes = fantastic. This is a great design. Maybe try something other than birds though, play around with some other guys.

Jiothelovely on Dec 14 '06

i love it! this is absolutely beautiful! $5

bitterbunny on Dec 14 '06

Birds into splatters or splatters into birds = overdone and cliche

mikey_ on Dec 14 '06

phil said it best. I really like the design, though. Alot. The guitar is subtle, important, at least for me.

carlo_capangpangan on Dec 14 '06

its good

xo_love_is_not_a_crime_xo on Dec 14 '06

i really wish I could buy this. I love the birds!

thursdy on Dec 14 '06

hello livetrace

dancingleah on Dec 14 '06

sure, probably a little cliche, but who cares. it is a great design. i love the disappearing guitar

smileing is my favorite on Dec 14 '06

Wow I love this shirt Would definetly buy that. i love da birtie i love di guitar an i love de splata. 5$

SweetThye on Dec 14 '06

Simple and cool.

Robbb on Dec 14 '06

Awesome, i'd buy it AND i'd wear it. 5$

pit_girl1 on Dec 14 '06

really like it!

pataskala27 on Dec 14 '06

I might have used something other then birds, except birds work well with the title.

LinaPants on Dec 14 '06

and works well w/ the love & rockets song..."song bird flies through the hole of a broken guitar" (or close to that).

JesiR on Dec 14 '06

I'd definitely buy this for a friend. Hope it gets printed.

What if you did it like a lightish blue color on brown? That would be awesomer.

styld on Dec 14 '06

i'd say 3. more color maybe?

crackersinmyshoe on Dec 15 '06

reminds me of those physchiatrist paint splotches...cool

Mantis25 on Dec 15 '06

dig it.

styx021 on Dec 15 '06

blargh i hate white and natural shirts

winki on Dec 15 '06

i quite likey...but the placement is way too big on the shirt.

pataskala27 on Dec 15 '06

The placement can be changed if wanted!

Funkyfairy on Dec 15 '06

idk, splatters, birds and a guitar?
all of those are images that are waaay over used. i'm not saying it doesnt look awesome. but i think if you're going to use something so overdone, you need to have a good reason to?
then again, im a snobby art student soooo disregard this!
keep going! :)

corvettegirl721 on Dec 15 '06

amazing i really like it and this is a design that personally i think looks good with a higher placement. mabey make it white on a black shirt?

punkyb on Dec 15 '06

i really like it, id totally wear it.

ambientcity on Dec 16 '06

pretty sweeet

hksofa3 on Dec 16 '06

great job, i like everything about it. another alternative could be to invert the colors

pataskala27 on Dec 17 '06

Invert option

pataskala27 on Dec 17 '06

http://static.flickr.com/136/325002336_90b2c2a82e.jpg

kate.rad on Dec 17 '06

Like this design, but to be picky, why is the bottom bird perched when all the others are flying? If its a parallel to music, wouldn't it make more sense for it to be in flight?

beauthomas on Dec 17 '06

I give this a solid 2. Good luck on your path to designing greatness.

gboy_68 on Dec 17 '06

amazing, but the placement and size seems awkward 5$

pataskala27 on Dec 17 '06

I agree I would not want the placement to look like that If this was to get printed. I put that there just a to give a idea of what it would look like on a tee

Polyester Jones on Dec 17 '06

love, love, love.
this is the perfect tshirt to wear for all those situations where my guitar arbitrarily explodes into flapping avian fury

johnL on Dec 18 '06

very cool. like it!!!!!!

steve_wirzba on Dec 19 '06

i love the idea, it needs treaking tho. maybe some red accents or something, and i dont know abou the size. it would prob buy it tho.

Kenzzzie on Dec 19 '06

Peppermont on Dec 21 '06

am I the only one who sees a face? what is my subconscious telling me!?

Frekinscnoth on Dec 21 '06

very purdyful, but i don't like the crow on the bottom standing on nothing, have it flying too?

santahat87 on Dec 21 '06

Tres Cool! 5$

somepoems on Dec 21 '06

I'm not a big fan of the three one-or-two-different-vector-point repeating largish splotches just to the left of the guitar. I likes me some randomness in me paint splotches. Also, I think the one bird not flying takes away some of the energy of the composition.

pattister on Dec 21 '06

I like it, but I think it would benefit from a different orientation on the shirt. Maybe rotate it a bit or something.

somepoems on Dec 21 '06

Right, I also just noticed that the two birds on the left seem to be just a mirrored copy too, with maybe a few point changes thrown in. I dunno. Many voters will downgrade a sub when they see some copy-and-pasting action going on.

pataskala27 on Dec 21 '06

Wow I didn't do half bad.

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pataskala27 on Jan 06 '07

bump

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