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Dec 12 '06
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kaezera
kaezera on Dec 12 '06
It's a really nice design but neither color scheme particularly appeals to me.
NJD
NJD on Dec 12 '06
maybe some lines to show how fast the wings are going.... but I like it!
tigrre
tigrre on Dec 12 '06
I would like it better if the bird furthest to the left wasn't so far inside the flower
xiiiin
xiiiin on Dec 13 '06
personally.. i LOVE the girl color scheme. composition-wise the yellow could be balanced across it a little better.. or tone it down a smidge. And it's a tad high on the shirt
iziation
iziation on Dec 13 '06
maybe like as its mentioned have some movement with the birds wings....the birds look a bit stiff...and the one on the left looks like it fell in the flower..., though your detail is really great. i like the drawing....
soliejete
soliejete on Dec 13 '06
The girls' color scheme is nice. I have two suggestions: first, that the boys' color is a little dark and flat; second, that metallic color would add liveliness to the birds and mimic the shimmering feathers they have in real life
tricksie
tricksie on Dec 13 '06
The positions of the hummingbirds are a bit askew.
ptjenn07
ptjenn07 on Dec 13 '06
i like the girls colors better. take the left bird out of the flower some. and the top bird looks like it's breaking its neck
noponies
   noponies on Dec 13 '06
humming birds fly into flowers to get nectar....



the birds are positioned by flowers, except the one that is upside down, which is there to make the composition more dynamic...
Shep
Shep on Dec 13 '06
Yea, i think the position of the birds is perfect - that's what hummingbirds look like when they go nectar hunting. The colors are nice too, though a bit striking. Great design overall.
notsocreativegrl
notsocreativegrl on Dec 13 '06
nice design, slightly awkward color schemes. if you're going to use bright colors on the design itself, try a more muted background color. or, better yet, try a richer, more classic color scheme overall-- like deep reds, greens, and browns.
reetzy_chick
reetzy_chick on Dec 13 '06
brown is much nicer..but i dont much like the position of the design...altho i do like the design itself
punkyb
punkyb on Dec 13 '06
I like the colors and the whole design but I would like the birds emphasized a little more.
herky
   herky on Dec 13 '06
nice illustration, lovely colors
Anabean
Anabean on Dec 14 '06
the design is great, but i don't like the girl's color shirt, i'd be more likely to buy a brown shirt than a bright blue one, maybe two more neutral colors for boys and girls, or just one color shirt
FrozeDream
FrozeDream on Dec 14 '06
I think it's cool but the angle of the top hummingbird kinda looks like the neck is at an odd angle or broken...
_elle_
_elle_ on Dec 14 '06
this is cool. the brown is way better than the aqua blue colour though.
hforhello
hforhello on Dec 14 '06
it's just darling!
eXistenZneon
eXistenZneon on Dec 15 '06
looks hot but the color scheme is not what I would prefer but its still cool
leahann
leahann on Dec 15 '06
I wouldn't change anything about this, it's very well drawn.
Thievery
Thievery on Dec 16 '06
lovely illustration, and lovely colours!

I want this on mint!!

$5
Ethilien
Ethilien on Dec 16 '06
very pretty, like another installment of that select tee
CheesecakeBree
CheesecakeBree on Dec 16 '06
Great color selection.
bachwasbaroque
bachwasbaroque on Dec 16 '06
I like the brown a loooot better.
sciencerules
sciencerules on Dec 17 '06
wonderful colors!
.onion
.onion on Dec 17 '06
I like the colors and the design :)
rockst3ady
rockst3ady on Dec 18 '06
i really like the illustration but i probably wouldnt buy it because i dont like both the shirt colors. 5 points anyway!!
oyster_press17
oyster_press17 on Dec 18 '06
I love it. $5
clo.
clo. on Dec 19 '06
the colours are lovelyyy
Vanghoul
Vanghoul on Dec 19 '06
"I would like it better if the bird furthest to the left wasn't so far inside the flower"



Ditto
risurocket
risurocket on Dec 19 '06
I would like it better if the hummers' colors were a little more subtle. The brown works.
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