Food Fight
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Dec 11 '06
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Hey, just wanted to introduce myself because i'm pretty new to this site and this is my first design. My name is Tom, I'm a Freelance Graphic Designer in London, and this sub is just a little thing i've had in my head for a while and wanted to get out. Would love to here some comments from everyone. Thanks
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If the bannanas were slightly smaller and more clustered together it would be a more clear mushroom cloud. I like the gorilla! $4
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I love it.. But, true.. The bananas look like a tree more than a mushroom cloud.
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i think there is a lot going on here... i think the gorilla grenade image could be on a different shirt entirely... not saying it has to be. I also agree about the banana mushroom tree... shame it is a mushroom cloud... at first i thought what a cool banana tree! then it was like oh... another war theme
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i thought it was a tree too, which would also work well as a concept.
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I like the bannana cloudand the ape holding a bannana grenade, just not on the same illustration. The grenade could probably stand alone. . . not so sure about the cloud
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Thanks for all the criticism so far guys, i appreciate the comments, keep 'em commin
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Theres a lot going on in this design, that being said - congrats on a great first Sub, it gets the message across pretty well
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so are you TomReynolds "aka Tom a 23.81 year old boy" or line_up_line_up "aka Tom Reynolds a 30.11 year old boy"?
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stoked on Dec 12 '06
I like the bannana cloudand the ape holding a bannana grenade, just not on the same illustration. The grenade could probably stand alone. . . not so sure about the cloud i agree |
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Montro on Dec 12 '06 Smart concept! and I love the expression on the monkey :)
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pickledbib, line-up-line-up has been closed, it was an account made for me and a fellow designer, that has been cancelled and i'm goin it alone. Thanks for the comment Montro and cheerz for the rest of the advice guys. Tom
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That's cool... just wondering. Good concept.
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Sorry if I'm repeating anyone else's comments...
It took me a minute to realize that was meant to be a mushroom cloud. Also, the grenade seems sort of moot considering there's a mushroom cloud on the horizon. Maybe stick with just one of the two. |
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the gorilla looks like the gorilla for 'Gorillaz' might be some copyright issues? but well done! flying the british flag woo :D
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sweet angry monkey - $5
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fix the bannaners and it would be amazing!
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The style of the gorilla, banana, and grenade all clash... if it were more congruous, it would look much better. The concept is funny, though.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Dec 16 '06 I think the images mesh quite well together, and i knew it as a mushroom cloud instantly. Very nice work, don't change a thing.
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oh man, my brother and i played that game soooo much in the 90s. the younger generation will never know the awesomeness that was DOS. good times. showing other/more bannanas/bannana-grenades exploding properly would do it for me.
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filak on Dec 16 '06 Nice $5
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nice idea, that's pretty kick ass. i'd buy it in a second
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yea i think it would be a definite winner if you shrank up the bananas to give the mushroom cloud more of a distant and detailed look. great concept, by the way.
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Let me start with saying, the mushroom cloud works as it is. Its obviously not a tree because of the size and also the shape at the bottom, and it works well that elements of the b/g can be seen through the gaps between the banans. Maybe think about giving the buildings the same black outline as the gorilla and you could be onto a winner. $4
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Nice, you could have called it 'guerilla warfare'! 5
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