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The Fencing Brooms

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Dec 14 '06
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cobecio

About my design

by cobecio
When the fine art of fencing meets the shortcomings of an ordinary life.
prophets and their pawns
prophets and their pawns on Dec 14 '06
good design, however I feel the text is too sharp for this kind of shirt. Also, try a pastel for the shirt color.
cobecio
cobecio on Dec 14 '06
mmmm good tip! I'll try it on pastel pink :-)



Thanks for voting!
bius
bius on Dec 14 '06
I'd like another font...

er-minio
er-minio on Dec 14 '06
hahahaha... this is GREAT!
Barbarito
Barbarito on Dec 14 '06
Wow!! This t-shirt is very, very beautiful.
se5k
   se5k on Dec 14 '06
it'd be alot better if the guys were not the same ... symmetry here just makes it look like you're too lazy to draw 2 guys
cobecio
cobecio on Dec 14 '06
@Se5K: Version 1.0 had a design like that, but I didn't like it that much. PS: heartsaburger is awesome! :D
chiefmc
chiefmc on Dec 14 '06
i always had the bristles below my hand..not in they're air. they're not very aerodynamic.
PepeG
PepeG on Dec 14 '06
Ti ho votato...
reelbigfish....alright
reelbigfish....alright on Dec 14 '06
ya this is like a cheap version of the one with brooms
yakanama
yakanama on Dec 14 '06
great! i'd buy it...
Pazzaycho
Pazzaycho on Dec 14 '06
...very good COBBBECIO but...please, don't give it me...hihihihi!!!! Psychooooo!!!!
pappone
pappone on Dec 14 '06
I like brooms, moreover I like "sweeping"...
KPeh
KPeh on Dec 14 '06
Erm. I don't get the reference... And as much as I would like a fencing related t-shirt, I can't say I like this very much.



Even if the pink is ignored, the text and banner (& especially the 'the') screams Microsoft Publisher or something.



Also, the pose they're in is completely silly... The front foot should be facing straight ahead, not to the side. The body should be lower, and the front leg should hit the ground at a right angle. Look up some photos on google. That not only is not a fencing lunge, but not a position anyone would get themselves in when fencing, and an uncomfortable posture to be in regardless!



Sorry!
Brat Worst
Brat Worst on Dec 14 '06
I'm from the country so as far as I'm concerned fencing is something you do with barbed wire and posts... It's a wicked design though, my only critcism would be to make the banner a bit less robotronic and rigid and more "flowy" and "ribbonish"... a nice effort though 4 and a pat on the back...
Touchtonne
Touchtonne on Dec 14 '06
i have an idea for a shirt like this, it is just two normal fencers and the caption "beekeepers are excellent swordsmen" you can use it if u want
human_no110289
human_no110289 on Dec 14 '06
$5 if not for the pink
K-man33
K-man33 on Dec 14 '06
pretty cool. you don't need the words to tell the story - i think the image speaks for itself. FUN!
Ed il Polso
Ed il Polso on Dec 15 '06
Very good !!!! Compliments Cobecio.....
ajalias69
ajalias69 on Dec 15 '06
haha, very funny!
DeadPoetic_Underoath
   DeadPoetic_Underoath on Dec 15 '06
hah really funny!
Kyoshi
Kyoshi on Dec 16 '06
very very nice...and good desing!!!! goodjob cobecio!
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Secca
Secca on Dec 19 '06
non ho fatto in tempo a votarti...per favore non ROSA...
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