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 It says Swefish, not "Swedish," which is on the original swedish fish if there's still copyright reasons I can take out the word all together. Enjoy! I love this shirt, I know I made it, but hell I would pay good money for it.
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cute. im slightly bothered how the fishing rod isnt exactly in the gummy bear's hands though. and the fact that the oars are bright greenmakes me think they're gummy also.
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valorandvellum on Dec 08 '06 Maybe there should be a shine on the gummies.
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Cute concept, maybe, work on the design a little more; and I'd totally buy it!
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yea, I uploaded the wrong version, I replaced the green oars with a gum drop motor http://www.imageupload.com/uploads/24fca_Fixed-gummi-Bear.gif
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The oars look better than the motor, the motor looks more like a grape. Not exactly the shape of a motor. I think the gummy bear could use more detail, perfection. It's the most bland spot of the design. Tweek it and it's gold.
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Gummi creatures! I wouldn't mind the "swefish" being totally taken off, and if you go with the gum-drop motor, maybe draw the bottom so that it doesn't look like a green blob; and then it'd be 5% "sweeter."
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I really like the idea! So cute!
I definitely agree with suggestions about adding shine and taking off the "Swefish" thing -- I don't think the label's really necessary for people to get it. I like the oars, but if you go with the gum drop I think you need to make it look like it has sugar on it. The lack of detail in that aspect makes it a little difficult to figure out what it is. Hope that helps! |
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you should work on the design a little more, but i love it!! |
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SO CUTE!!
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oh man, this is a fantastic idea, but the execution is just terrible. what a paradox...the perspective on the boat is all wrong, the bear looks nothing like an actual gummy bear, the gummy worm looks fuzzy for some reason,and the whole thing just generally lacks depth and dimension. if you can tweak the execution, or have someone else draw it for you and split the profits, this theoretically could be a winner.
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yup, you're right I have all these ideas, but no artistic skill and I'm just learning how to use illustrator, hopefully it would come out better next time, Thanks for the comments : )
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Too cute, I heart gummy food. Fix up the bear a little, he looks like a blob and I would totally wear this.
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sweetish fish are one of the best candies ever
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work on your art!
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I love anything gummy! But they need some shine.
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I love it I love the colors. the bear could have a little more detail
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oh I just love this!
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heck ya
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very clever, i would buy it! 5$
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Love the concept. Keep at it.
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gummy bears and swedish fish, my favorites.
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great concept, but not so clear if you havent read the title first..
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gummy bear kinda looks like a big orange poo....might make him look more like a gummy bear
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i really love the idea, but the art could use a little work.
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oh wow this is just AMAZING. i'd buy it!
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Cool. Very cool with a bit of tweakage. $4 for now...
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adorable!!! def make the gummy more detailed and holding the pole...but i give it a 5!
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I'd angle the bear so he's more facing out, that's the view that's more recognizable. Otherwise, i dig, mos def.
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the colours and images in this are really ugly.
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yay! gummy things!
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Some suggestions. Lighter color, maybe aqua? More defined and recognizable figures. No words. And the pole shouldn't be bent unless there's a fish on it. Make the gummies prettier colors too. But I LOVE the concept! I'd wear it if you made more improvements!
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concept is great but design needs to be manipulated...
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dude that rox i wish i could have it
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