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Dec 06 '06
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Urban Ninja

About my design

by Urban Ninja
I like this design, but I'm not sure If I should have added a shadow underneath to ground her... Oh well, live and learn.
rasierer_bob
rasierer_bob on Dec 06 '06
most beautifull
thekheshirekat
thekheshirekat on Dec 06 '06
nice! the lines are fnny looking but im guessing thats just from resizing
mikey_
mikey_ on Dec 06 '06
I like it alot, but it's The Crane Wife, not the Island. That being said, It might be too dark? If the background were in another color maybe? 4 *and a half ; ) *
XIIIwulf
XIIIwulf on Dec 06 '06
5$ without hesitation. I hope that the rest of The Decemberist subs are going to be half as good as this. That would make them damn good. 'Cause this is damn awesome.
Joe..
Joe.. on Dec 06 '06
looks a lot like the "flowers in the Attic" sub.
JefftheStud
JefftheStud on Dec 06 '06
i wouldnt say it looks like flowers in the attic at all. it just goes diagonally across the shirt. a thousand shirts do that.

i think you should put the showdow underneath though. and some lines look a little unclean. but i really like this submission.
Juggernaut Joe
Juggernaut Joe on Dec 06 '06
"I like it alot, but it's The Crane Wife, not the Island. That being said, It might be too dark? If the background were in another color maybe? 4 *and a half ; ) *"



The competition prompt is actually The Island...



Nice design by the way.
Urban Ninja
Urban Ninja on Dec 06 '06
Yeah, I noticed the whole "Island" thing after I submitted it. I think a lot of designers were so excited, they saw the words "Crane Wife" and designed away. It's too bad there have already been many attractive, yet irrelevant submissions.
Juggernaut Joe
Juggernaut Joe on Dec 06 '06
Yeah, luckily you get three subs
theurbanraptor
theurbanraptor on Dec 06 '06
its a lil pixelated.
ebil_elf
ebil_elf on Dec 06 '06
it needs more color, tils too dark on its own. maybe color the Obi of her kimono or something small like that, just to add a touch more color.
abbster
abbster on Dec 06 '06
Oh, AWESOME! Irrelevant design or not, this is amazing. It's beautiful.
deep space monkey
   deep space monkey on Dec 07 '06
It looks like something from "Hero."
mrdeadhead
mrdeadhead on Dec 07 '06
no shadow neeeded.
Les Os
Les Os on Dec 07 '06
reminds me of fatal frame 2. i like it a lot.
Tama-so-so
Tama-so-so on Dec 07 '06
great! just dark enough for that song!
deathcabfortom
deathcabfortom on Dec 07 '06
more detail on the feathers and ill friggin kiss the computer screen.
gadget arms
gadget arms on Dec 07 '06
The feathers should probably be as detailed as the rest. Otherwise I love it.
waddlin_penguin
waddlin_penguin on Dec 07 '06
It would definitely be cooler if the feathers wre more than just outlines.
alessa
alessa on Dec 08 '06
I love this design! I would wear this breakfast, noon, and night.
joannchilada
joannchilada on Dec 08 '06
I hate when that happens. But I like the design.
caffeine_queenie
caffeine_queenie on Dec 09 '06
I really like this, but maybe you could make the feathers a different color like white or grey, they look like flames...
criscovisco
criscovisco on Dec 10 '06
reminds me of the movie version of memoirs of a geisha... at the end of sayuri's snow dance she is in a similar position, but bent back so her head is almost touching the floor
rholliday
rholliday on Dec 11 '06
It's only like FitA in that there are things flying across the shirt. Spiritually (ha!) it reminds me of stickymike's Set Me Free, but I think this is a design that fairly clearly stands on its own.
maechel
maechel on Dec 12 '06
Nice design! It doesn't look too much like "Flowers in the Attic" at all, but I'd maybe make her hair a different (more contrasting) color? Maybe it's just my computer...4
cottageboy
cottageboy on Dec 12 '06
i like it, but it really looks like it needs to be cleaned up.



and I agree with the feathers needing to match the detail of the rest, but the colour of them is awesome.



:thumbup:
findabhair
findabhair on Dec 12 '06
YES I love it
Kaytlin
Kaytlin on Dec 12 '06
gave me chills.
Urban Ninja
Urban Ninja on Dec 13 '06
Thanks for all the input. If somebody would let me know how to not loose quality when I size an image down, it would be much appreciated. I'm kinda new to all this computer stuff.
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