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 This is UK PLC.
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I'd work on the typography and its spacing with the graphic. It could feel stronger, I think.
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I just love Britan.
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Listen to TonyCliff, he's droppin it like its hot. Type needs work.
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if anyone seems interested I may have ago, but if its clear that no ones interested then theres no point. People tend to either liek the idea or not and theres no point pushing it if it doesnt immediately click.
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I like the concept. The text doesn't seem to work, I think it overwhelms the graphic by both size and spacing.
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I'd raise the "UK plc" a tad and move it into the notch in the map a bit. The since date seems kind of dangle-ish where it's placed now. Perhaps if you moved it to the left of the "p" and raised it a bit it wouldn't look so tacked on.
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i did try that, but it didnt look right. as i said, if there seems enough interest ill have another look.
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i like the idea- maybe finding text that would be from an atlas..or a government-town sign.
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I'd be quite happy just having the extruded map of Britain.
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ill probably post just that next then, see what reaction it get
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The shirt wouldn't be so bad if the text wasn't. I think it needs text, otherwise I wouldn't make the connection that it was of the UK, but the text is so bland that I think it'd look better without it.
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the text is suppossed to look bland - its corporate
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To be honest, most corporate brands: AE, Gap, Old Navy and so on, dont have such bland god-awful texts as this. So I dont think it screams 'corporate'.
If you want corporate, put a faded sailor and some retro 60s text, and *that*'s corporate. Not helvetica. |
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its not helvetica, its frutiger (or franklin maybe, i forget) by coporate i dont mean clothing corporate, i mean corporate-corporate like Orange or Dell or MS. Ill try it without the text next i think
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stop.
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