Random words for random people

im sorry, but i think this is sophomoric

eh it's a jumble of stuff but still comes out as a big square. maybe try moving stuff around to make it fade out more into the shirt.
also it's a lil too blah for a shirt. maybe try doing something like this where all the words create an image themselves?

reminds me of an assignment i had in elementary school. i failed horribly but i like how the "notes" came out. cute. it is a big boxy though like deadhead said

print it BIG and in the middle.

whaaa

Oh, I forgot to mention that this is my first design ever. I actually made this for an after-school project and thought "Hey, why don't i try to make a tee out of this"

Thanks for all the pointers guys and gals, I appreciate it

i like it but i agree its too square.

I like the simplicity of this. But I don't like how some of the words dont' illustrate what they are. Like parasol and tea. I'd rather see each word illustrate itself.

Some of your notes are backwards... They're supposed to be 'p' and 'd,' as opposed to 'b' and 'q.'

reminds me of my notes at school, yo