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its a great illustration, but a little sperm-y. i agree with beanboy about the face... maybe add some bigger characters to the centre? its kind of medusa-like, so a face would be tops.
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Awesome skills. I like red and purple best. But like others said, I wold like an extra element. I don't like faces much so I'll lobby for feathers, wings, and bird.
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I think it's just fine without a face or some hidden design. Why can't it just be beautiful? 5$ from me!
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Hold on a minute, you asked to know what we thought so you can improve, but then you say you aren't willing to change the design? which is it? oh, and you get a 5.
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not sure if I'm saying this well, but I would like to see more flow to it, not have it taper off at both end but sort of expand outward/ have more space between lines, etc. refreshing though.
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Really like this, I dont think it really needs any faces or anything in it, its already pretty fun to look at ^_^ id buy it $5
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i'd like to see the design a bit smaller. it takes so much of the shirt. the design is very pretty. i'm just not feeling the s-shape
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it would be nicer if you left it all in one peice, as it is, it's very exciteing, but hard to see what the details look like and imagine it on a shirt, but it's pretty decent anyway
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About my design
Please let me know what you think so I can improve.