Threadless T-Shirts - Be Still, My Beating Heart

Be Still, My Beating Heart

Submitted by:

herky
on Dec 02 '06

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Average score:

2.08 out of 5

Number scored:

2,251 people

Scoring finished:

524 days ago

Comments:

55 comments

Design forum

herky on Dec 01 '06

I wish I could break free from the fast food chain myself. Stop before you start, be still my beating heart...

Lambda on Dec 02 '06

I think it should be with the text.

Petanca on Dec 02 '06

Nice characters!, I wish the heart was int he same stiles as the rest of the things, you get a 4$

travioli on Dec 02 '06

ambientcity on Dec 02 '06

wouldn't eat it, but i'd buy it. :]. 5.

cpdesign on Dec 02 '06

Great concept and Illustration once again Herky. Another 5.

Speak_Easy on Dec 02 '06

Nice design and FFN concept. Title makes me think of "Be Still My Heart" by the Postal Service. :D 5

andyg on Dec 02 '06

I really think this is AWESOME! You should win the Fast Food Nation comp. $$5 PRINT IT!!!!

mikemills on Dec 02 '06

On red - 5$

chelly on Dec 02 '06

i'll catch you donut!!!!!!!!!!!

eky on Dec 02 '06

Cool, even the chips have faces. And I've always thought falafel was healty(er).
I think maybe some more detail in the heart? Maybe make it look like its about to explode, or at least make it look like its struggling. nice, one of the best in the contest so far

Raid71 on Dec 02 '06

This has print written all over it... $5

phones on Dec 02 '06

$5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

make love not war on Dec 02 '06

its a good concept and i'd wear it. good job. $5

squintygirl on Dec 02 '06

Sweet! I love the frightened french fries! 5$

Raj Mahtaj on Dec 02 '06

I believe that's a taco not a falafel.

Love it. $$$$5.

rinnanstimpy on Dec 02 '06

sweeeeeeeet! i want

rudra on Dec 02 '06

FWF!! - it's the comp, I know - so far one of the best - i think the food stands out better on navy (or charcoal) - but i kinda wish the heart was a little more "fleshed out" - maybe if it was drawn in red instead of white? with the face in black so it stands out more, (and the heart should be a wee bit larger, although the positioning is good)

msteinmann on Dec 02 '06

cool commentary, neat shirt, I'd buy

monmont on Dec 02 '06

you are the man herky, nice as always!

nintechno on Dec 02 '06

If this isn't printed, I'm going to have a heart attack!

$5!

lemonalle on Dec 03 '06

Give this man a print!

lepetitmonstre on Dec 03 '06

i love this.

Cheri-Berry on Dec 03 '06

Great concept, and the little food guys are awesome! I agree with the other comments above though, about wishing that the heart flowed in the same style as the characters.

HeyHay2989 on Dec 03 '06

Oh this is so cool! I'd have to agree with the others though, the heart should be the same style. But awesome all the same!

JELLYTANK on Dec 04 '06

great job!

Ava Adore on Dec 04 '06

great!

DeadPoetic_Underoath on Dec 04 '06

awesome! hey threadless, print herky now! whoa 5$

pinup-artist on Dec 04 '06

i love this!! $5

Fadeawayj on Dec 04 '06

DOPE CONCEPT!!! Def BUY!!

AlinaT on Dec 04 '06

this is soo awesome! i love it!!!! $5

brobot on Dec 04 '06

I like it. I almost think the shirt without the heart would be a better design. The two styles just don't mesh well in my opinion

Ausmoz on Dec 04 '06

$5. I like the heart in the different style to the characters.

Ausmoz on Dec 04 '06

Then again, the heart might look better in the same style.

andyg on Dec 05 '06

What are you people talking about? The heart is PERFECT. This design needs no altering. Start the printing already!

FRICKINAWESOME on Dec 05 '06

Gorsh, I can't wait for this design to win if not the Fast Food Comp, then just a random after-competition win would suffice as well. Just mark my words, it shall be printed!!!! 5 and buy, easy.

sonmi on Dec 05 '06

ahh i can't get over how greatly retro your style is!

Noko on Dec 05 '06

Very nice, best FFN tee I've seen so far. 5$

herky on Dec 06 '06

Click on this to see a version of the heart rendered in the same way as the fast food characters.

Unicornsareawesomex on Dec 06 '06

I well prefer the heart with the yellow lines.
I'd buy this right now on blue!
$5$5$5

MarkieB78 on Dec 06 '06

I think I like the 3-D heart better. But the dark shirt makes the black outline hard to see which is a shame. Great illustrations though. Well done.

MarkieB78 on Dec 06 '06

The "Let's all go to the lobby" song from the movie theater is now stuck in my head.

nintechno on Dec 07 '06

I love the original on blue!

This would make the perfect long sleeve shirt.

nintechno on Dec 07 '06

Oh, one more thing, the french fries are hilarious.

random rain on Dec 07 '06

yes, with fleshed out heart. print this baby!$5.

papasmurf22 on Dec 09 '06

I love the text... Very poetic

lockerkey on Dec 09 '06

that is awsomee!

herky on Dec 09 '06

Thanks to everyone for the comments and votes.

nintechno- many thanks for your comments and posting this design on your profile page. I'm also partial to the original option as well, and I really appreciate your support.:)

nintechno on Dec 09 '06

No problem

This only scored a 2.08! WHAT!

Dear Threadless,

I want you to get up right now, sit up, go to your windows, open them and stick your head out and yell - I'm as mad as hell and I'm not going to take this anymore!

pinup-artist on Dec 11 '06

2.08?????? this is one of the only good fast food nation designs. crazy

nintechno on Dec 11 '06

^^^ agreed --- I am not pleased

andyg on Dec 11 '06

Your designs consistently get robbed. I don't see how anyone could be happy scoring this design anything less than a 3.

nintechno on Dec 11 '06

Threadless, we demand justice!

herky on Dec 12 '06

Thanks for the support pinup-artist and andyg, no worries just got to roll with the punches.

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