I think you could be a little more sparing with the marble texture. Also, the colors could be a little more harmonious. But your idea is great! I think it's almost there. 4 for now, $5 if you resubmit.
WOW. So cool! I agree with what someone said above, use colors that match better and are less garish. Don't do the second option, where they're all one color, because that's too bland. This is such a great concept! ANd other than the colors I wouldn't change anything! 5
How much does someone wanna bet me this will be printed? ANYONE??!?! PLEASE use the purple combo with the garish colors on it b/c that to me reminds me of the 80's graffiti fashionista statements. Damn you though Kooky for not taking my title of "Break Dance"! Just a stunning job man! 5$$$$$etc.