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Add dashes to the end of the lines where you split a word (ie - exp-erience), and a comma after justification would be nice. It's close to a buy for me as well. 5
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Voilą! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villain by the vicissitudes of fate. This visage, no mere...oh wait, wrong movie. My bad
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haha rich, i love that movie!
also: there does not grammatically need to be a comma after justification. you could add dashes, but its fine without. i like this. good job! |
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i love love love love love love love love the text!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but not the design :( gets a 4 from me anyway
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I love the text and the design...but I'm not sure about the off-centered image. I think it would go over better if it was centered even though it is to one side on purpose.
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Needs better colours and centreing.. acutally I like the text but not the overall design. Could you use the text in a different way??
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LOVE IT. 5$ definitely. I really dont care for type shirts, but this is better than any type shirt Ive seen.
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About my design
A-tion of Reality
(by economos)
Only as a result of capitulation to eternal temptation do I experience elation through intoxicaton and hallucination. No amount of frustration seems to occasion enough determination for the culmination of my fixation. Will there ever be any justification or is it always a rotation of desperation and intoleration without hope of imminent salvation?