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schleb
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Lamo Levo
Lamo Levo on Dec 01 '06
you know? I'd actually prefer this without the balloon in place of his head at all! Then it'd be ace! The collar is a little bit wide too, just a bit... Great though, great idea.
ashtray1
ashtray1 on Dec 01 '06
hehe its cute...5
morganian
morganian on Dec 01 '06
you need the reflection on the balloon, but it needs to look smoother, plus the head looks like a rougher drawing than the body, the black outline is all even thickness on the body but round the neck & chin of the head its all over the place.
Nice idea all the same.
The Ending
The Ending on Dec 01 '06
the balloon looks a bit of an odd shape. maybe have a different colour tie?
evrfixedmark
evrfixedmark on Dec 01 '06
i agree with what morganian said about smoothing the reflection on the balloon and evening the thick-to-thin line ratio for the head and body. i also think the composition would be more interesting if his head was floating higher.
MeggoWaffles
MeggoWaffles on Dec 01 '06
the best, by a scale of one to ever. ever and ever. and it's so ever.
criatura
criatura on Dec 01 '06
hahahahaha
greendaygirl80
greendaygirl80 on Dec 01 '06
with shiny part–without you cant tell what it is
Zooble
Zooble on Dec 01 '06
with the shiny part for sure. i agree with morganian as well. work on the head and you'll be gold.
thatcrazywyles
thatcrazywyles on Dec 01 '06
with. great idea =)
Holloween1989
Holloween1989 on Dec 01 '06
AIR HEAD!!
Dilemma8
Dilemma8 on Dec 01 '06
well, i don't get it
andalusia
andalusia on Dec 01 '06
very nice. i would prefer it with out balloon head holding the man balloon too, but it's still really cool.
JefftheStud
JefftheStud on Dec 01 '06
definately with shiny red spot.
deathcabfortom
deathcabfortom on Dec 01 '06
loll
Buclkes and or Straps
Buclkes and or Straps on Dec 01 '06
dhiny red spot yes and i like evrfixedmark's idea of the ballon head floating higher, regardless 5 $$$$$
Candiru
Candiru on Dec 01 '06
hiTl3r c4M3 t0 miNd
bonsoirmel
bonsoirmel on Dec 01 '06
I agree with whoever said to not have the balloon at all, just a headless guy with his head as the balloon. I really like it! I give it a 4, with room to go to 5 if either the balloon is removed altogether, or if it's changed a little (fix the highlight and perhaps make the balloon not so thin in the neck - make it the same width as if it was a human head/neck).
schleb
schleb on Dec 01 '06
thanks guys! i'm going to work on one without the balloon head after this ones done. and i'll make the head higher. woohooo
Scharley3
Scharley3 on Dec 01 '06
with the shiny spot
squeegie
squeegie on Dec 01 '06
absolutely positively amazing, wow you are by far the coolest person on this entire site, oh man I wish I could meet you in real life and that we could be friends and then I could be on your top 8 on myspace and everything. wow you're tooooo fantastic how do you do it?

Andy Warhol
Andy Warhol on Dec 01 '06
i would try i different shirt color
very simple yet very awesome
5
LNiu418
LNiu418 on Dec 02 '06
this shirt is hilarious and genius. i just might buy one.
ori_
ori_ on Dec 02 '06
haha. yes! all y'all need to bow down and revel in its glory.
spinnersun
spinnersun on Dec 02 '06
I agree with the person above. It might be nicer without the balloon at all, and a different color tie. Otherwise, great idea :)
wavegoddezz
wavegoddezz on Dec 02 '06
i gave it a 5$
=] nice job
rachyluv
rachyluv on Dec 02 '06
i really like it. i would definitely buy it.
goldkiss
   goldkiss on Dec 02 '06
ha ha like the idea
emmosity
emmosity on Dec 02 '06
NICE
weirdpoopoobaby
weirdpoopoobaby on Dec 02 '06
I agree with the others about having no balloon head at all. You could also play with the expression on the face - perhaps forlornly looking back at it's body? Great work!
killerqueen33
killerqueen33 on Dec 03 '06
confused, i'm positive i commented on this before... oh well. i like the shiny spot
Pobodys Nerfect
Pobodys Nerfect on Dec 03 '06
with
asparagi
asparagi on Dec 03 '06
With.
JolyBallz
JolyBallz on Dec 04 '06
shiny spot for sure
mrdeadhead
mrdeadhead on Dec 04 '06
just want you to know that the lines on the body are all very crisp and clean, but the head, shiny spot, and balloon, are shakey and kind of messy. so the first thing that jumps to my mind is the body is not an original, but modified. not saying one way or another if it is, just putting my opinion out.
you should clean that up if you want more.
mrdeadhead
mrdeadhead on Dec 04 '06
and yes, once you clean it up, go with the shiny spot.
maverick32
maverick32 on Dec 04 '06
I think the balloon head needs to have a string going down the shirt instead of the strange balloon neck. Other than that it's coo'.
CanvasCookies
CanvasCookies on Dec 04 '06
with shiny
mythidiot
mythidiot on Dec 04 '06
I've seen this concept on an old movie called
schleb
schleb on Dec 04 '06
mrdeadhead- it looks like that because i did the body by hand and the head on the computer.

just wanted to clear that up
Gunslinger_ Extraordinaire
lol.

for some reason, i really like this, and it makes me giggle.
tigershark
tigershark on Dec 05 '06
1. shiny red spot needs to stay, otherwise it looks like a blood blister or something 2. face looks a bit too much like hitler.
almost emo
almost emo on Dec 05 '06
great idea, but i little better drawing for the face, and maybe a reflection on the baloon, this would be perfect.
5$
stinkepete2021
stinkepete2021 on Dec 05 '06
definitely with the shiny spot, and make the tie a different color than the balloon....awesome design
jimshin
jimshin on Dec 06 '06
it would look better with the shine
jillypilly
jillypilly on Dec 06 '06
maybe make the tie with big stripes. you know the kind with two colors? i really like it though.
thegetupkid69
thegetupkid69 on Dec 07 '06
has to have the shiny spot. without you wouldn't know if it is a balloon.
5 days later
Caasiopia68
Caasiopia68 on Dec 12 '06
i thought of one like that. but it was a snowman making a person. i never designed it tho cus i suck at that
68 days later
evrybdydancenw
evrybdydancenw on Feb 19 '07
yeah maybe without the balloon
it would still make the point but look cleaner
schleb
schleb on Feb 20 '07
haha. why did this get bumped?
5 days later
J-Ray
J-Ray on Feb 25 '07
bump.

this is great, i wish i'd seen it before.
schleb
schleb on Feb 25 '07
i might redo the head and resub. it's better than pretty please take 1 imo, but it scored worse. hmph
12 days later
buhhtages
buhhtages on Mar 10 '07
aww this is really good, schlebby!

i'm so proud of yooooooooooooooo

dweeb.

but really, i do like it
8 days later
flopart
flopart on Mar 19 '07
nice man!!! it's great!!!!

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