you know? I'd actually prefer this without the balloon in place of his head at all! Then it'd be ace! The collar is a little bit wide too, just a bit... Great though, great idea.
you need the reflection on the balloon, but it needs to look smoother, plus the head looks like a rougher drawing than the body, the black outline is all even thickness on the body but round the neck & chin of the head its all over the place.
Nice idea all the same.
i agree with what morganian said about smoothing the reflection on the balloon and evening the thick-to-thin line ratio for the head and body. i also think the composition would be more interesting if his head was floating higher.
I agree with whoever said to not have the balloon at all, just a headless guy with his head as the balloon. I really like it! I give it a 4, with room to go to 5 if either the balloon is removed altogether, or if it's changed a little (fix the highlight and perhaps make the balloon not so thin in the neck - make it the same width as if it was a human head/neck).
absolutely positively amazing, wow you are by far the coolest person on this entire site, oh man I wish I could meet you in real life and that we could be friends and then I could be on your top 8 on myspace and everything. wow you're tooooo fantastic how do you do it?
I agree with the others about having no balloon head at all. You could also play with the expression on the face - perhaps forlornly looking back at it's body? Great work!
just want you to know that the lines on the body are all very crisp and clean, but the head, shiny spot, and balloon, are shakey and kind of messy. so the first thing that jumps to my mind is the body is not an original, but modified. not saying one way or another if it is, just putting my opinion out.
you should clean that up if you want more.
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Lamo Levo
you know? I'd actually prefer this without the balloon in place of his head at all! Then it'd be ace! The collar is a little bit wide too, just a bit... Great though, great idea.
ashtray1
hehe its cute...5
morganian
you need the reflection on the balloon, but it needs to look smoother, plus the head looks like a rougher drawing than the body, the black outline is all even thickness on the body but round the neck & chin of the head its all over the place.
Nice idea all the same.
The Ending
the balloon looks a bit of an odd shape. maybe have a different colour tie?
evrfixedmark
i agree with what morganian said about smoothing the reflection on the balloon and evening the thick-to-thin line ratio for the head and body. i also think the composition would be more interesting if his head was floating higher.
MeggoWaffles
the best, by a scale of one to ever. ever and ever. and it's so ever.
criatura
hahahahaha
greendaygirl80
with shiny part–without you cant tell what it is
Zooble
with the shiny part for sure. i agree with morganian as well. work on the head and you'll be gold.
thatcrazywyles
with. great idea =)
Holloween1989
AIR HEAD!!
Dilemma8
well, i don't get it
andalusia
very nice. i would prefer it with out balloon head holding the man balloon too, but it's still really cool.
JefftheStud
definately with shiny red spot.
deathcabfortom
loll
Buclkes and or Straps
dhiny red spot yes and i like evrfixedmark's idea of the ballon head floating higher, regardless 5 $$$$$
Candiru
hiTl3r c4M3 t0 miNd
bonsoirmel
I agree with whoever said to not have the balloon at all, just a headless guy with his head as the balloon. I really like it! I give it a 4, with room to go to 5 if either the balloon is removed altogether, or if it's changed a little (fix the highlight and perhaps make the balloon not so thin in the neck - make it the same width as if it was a human head/neck).
schleb
thanks guys! i'm going to work on one without the balloon head after this ones done. and i'll make the head higher. woohooo
Scharley3
with the shiny spot
squeegie
absolutely positively amazing, wow you are by far the coolest person on this entire site, oh man I wish I could meet you in real life and that we could be friends and then I could be on your top 8 on myspace and everything. wow you're tooooo fantastic how do you do it?
Andy Warhol
i would try i different shirt color
very simple yet very awesome
5
LNiu418
this shirt is hilarious and genius. i just might buy one.
ori_
haha. yes! all y'all need to bow down and revel in its glory.
spinnersun
I agree with the person above. It might be nicer without the balloon at all, and a different color tie. Otherwise, great idea :)
wavegoddezz
i gave it a 5$
=] nice job
rachyluv
i really like it. i would definitely buy it.
goldkiss
ha ha like the idea
emmosity
NICE
weirdpoopoobaby
I agree with the others about having no balloon head at all. You could also play with the expression on the face - perhaps forlornly looking back at it's body? Great work!
killerqueen33
confused, i'm positive i commented on this before... oh well. i like the shiny spot
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JolyBallz
shiny spot for sure
mrdeadhead
just want you to know that the lines on the body are all very crisp and clean, but the head, shiny spot, and balloon, are shakey and kind of messy. so the first thing that jumps to my mind is the body is not an original, but modified. not saying one way or another if it is, just putting my opinion out.
you should clean that up if you want more.
mrdeadhead
and yes, once you clean it up, go with the shiny spot.
maverick32
I think the balloon head needs to have a string going down the shirt instead of the strange balloon neck. Other than that it's coo'.
CanvasCookies
with shiny
mythidiot
I've seen this concept on an old movie called
schleb
mrdeadhead- it looks like that because i did the body by hand and the head on the computer.
just wanted to clear that up
Gunslinger_ Extraordinaire
lol.
for some reason, i really like this, and it makes me giggle.
tigershark
almost emo
great idea, but i little better drawing for the face, and maybe a reflection on the baloon, this would be perfect.
5$
stinkepete2021
definitely with the shiny spot, and make the tie a different color than the balloon....awesome design
jimshin
it would look better with the shine
jillypilly
maybe make the tie with big stripes. you know the kind with two colors? i really like it though.
thegetupkid69
has to have the shiny spot. without you wouldn't know if it is a balloon.
Caasiopia68
i thought of one like that. but it was a snowman making a person. i never designed it tho cus i suck at that
evrybdydancenw
yeah maybe without the balloon
it would still make the point but look cleaner
schleb
haha. why did this get bumped?
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