For Pop 5 Loves Threadless - "It's not what you know, but how you show it." Exultation, jubilee, felicity, benediction...A list vocabulary words, a smile shows them all. Should look good in other colors as well.
The selection of fonts is much better on this revised version. Also, I like the upper chest/neck placement. However, something still seems like it's missing. Just that extra little something.
now i can't see the smaller, lighter colored letters behind the larger ones. these fonts don't rub me the right way either. i still love the concept though. maybe the lips should be filled with only smaller words, alternating light and dark? maybe creating a pattern?
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For Pop 5 Loves Threadless - "It's not what you know, but how you show it." Exultation, jubilee, felicity, benediction...A list vocabulary words, a smile shows them all. Should look good in other colors as well.