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A resub, simplified. ORIGINAL SUB LARGE VERSION SHIRT PLACEMENT
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I liked the textures you used in the other one better, and also the text was perfect, I wouldn't take it away. both designs are absolutely gorgeous and sweet, though.
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the story on the original shirt is one of my favorite things I've ever read.
i'd like for at least one version of this design to see printing. |
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Thanks - I do feel like this design holds its own, but I hope no-one can blame me for trying. Here's the original story again, for what it's worth.
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It's good but like many people have said I love the original - which I somehow never saw - it's beautiful though! This is nice but not as exciting somehow
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I'm partial to the first version. but what you've done by making this idea a tad bolder should help it print like a champ. Please Print this time!!! 5$
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both were a bit hard to read, but i like this simplified version cuz the meaning of the words stand out more. nice artwork too $/5
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Thanks. I guess since it didn't make it the first time, I wondered if the writing or the textures were just too much. Mostly I did it for catharsis - I'm moving on after this ; )
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i still have no idea why the original hasn't received a print. this version id good, too, but the original just seemed to flow much better. nice work as always, tho
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love original and new
but its kinda hard to read the text on both but still love.. and would totally by. p.s. the placement is perfectO! |