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Time For Lunch

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Nov 27 '06
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TionTheOne
TionTheOne on Nov 27 '06
It is a circle of eatings! I very much like.
chix96
chix96 on Nov 27 '06
I like the concept because I'll buy almost anything with an octopus or a squid on it, but if you're going to do animals you should really do them in some form of anatomical correctness, like giving the whale/porpoise pectoral fins. I'd also like to see some sort of water line and maybe the support pillars for the pier. Also... the circle-of-eatings is all wrong zoologically, but I'd probably still buy it. :P
MaudlinLaura
MaudlinLaura on Nov 27 '06
i wish the fishing line was smoother looking
Chinoiserie
Chinoiserie on Nov 27 '06
i have an octopus artwork, still pending for approval. I like this one. The concept in some extent is similar to my Ecosystem. Green for me
DeadPoetic_Underoath
   DeadPoetic_Underoath on Nov 28 '06
5$
Kevib84
Kevib84 on Nov 28 '06
Cool Concept. I def. pick one up.
claude.mercure
claude.mercure on Nov 28 '06
I like the style, but why is that boy stepping on that poor octopus' arm?
LookingForward
LookingForward on Nov 28 '06
I love the idea, and the drawings are cute... but for some reason, the execution is... not really working. I don't know how to say what I mean... lol.



Help anyone?
FRAGOSO
FRAGOSO on Nov 29 '06
Too "flat"
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LauraJerry
LauraJerry on Dec 01 '06
I love the idea, but as other people have said, it looks a bit off -- maybe adding a water line would help.
tragicfaerie
tragicfaerie on Dec 01 '06
a water line would be good ... and maybe the kid facing the other direction. i don't think it would look so one dimensional if the kid were fishing off one end of the dock and the animals where forming a circle underneath it.
Meron
Meron on Dec 02 '06
i love the idea but wouldn't buy it....they're so in a row, looks a bit too straight
Meron
Meron on Dec 02 '06
oh sorry, that one was meant for the submission before. i like your design, but it needs more "movement" too
ambientcity
ambientcity on Dec 02 '06
love it.
quantumlemur
quantumlemur on Dec 02 '06
Great idea, but I agree that it needs more movement...it takes too long to figure out what's going on when they look like they're just pictures together
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SpiritEntity
SpiritEntity on Mar 12 '07
I love the idea and the colours, but the design is a bit confusing at first. I agree that a waterline might help as well as some pier supports. Additionally, I would do something about the placement of the tentacle below the foot...it is part of what makes the composition so confusing. After some edits, I bet I'd buy it.
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