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Not Afraid

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Dec 01 '06
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McJamie

About my design

by McJamie
My first submission. I've always wanted to submit a design to Threadless, and when I began work on this school project, I thought, "Why not kill two birds with one stone?" So here is the fearless Mr. Elephant enjoying a stroll with his best friend, Sir Mouse. I hope you like it, and thanks for your votes! C;
seanbs89
seanbs89 on Dec 01 '06
From his legs it looks like hes going to trip over himself
valorandvellum
   valorandvellum on Dec 01 '06
Love the line quality! The back legs look slightly awkward... but the drawing still looks cool.
JefftheStud
JefftheStud on Dec 01 '06
on greeeeeeen yes!
andyg
   andyg on Dec 01 '06
Awesome illustration! 5
caelestisblue
caelestisblue on Dec 01 '06
I'm not crazy about the yellow, but this is wondeful on green.
schleb
schleb on Dec 01 '06
definitely on green. nice first sub!
Baumwollheld
Baumwollheld on Dec 01 '06
Yes, really nice first sub! Good luck!
LionelM
LionelM on Dec 01 '06
Like on green.
katolms
katolms on Dec 01 '06
Put in on a pink shirt in honor of Dumbo and his mouse friend...
FRAGOSO
FRAGOSO on Dec 02 '06
Except the legs (look strange..), it is a wonderful TShirt. Good job!
MooseDinner
MooseDinner on Dec 02 '06
yeah, the back legs look a little weird. I'm not sure what the gait of an elephant is supposed to look like, but I think the back right lack should be the farthest back. on second look, the back right leg looks like it sorta gets thinner between the knee and foot. the design looks good on that green.
Buclkes and or Straps
Buclkes and or Straps on Dec 02 '06
need this T...in both colours 5 $$
Buclkes and or Straps
Buclkes and or Straps on Dec 02 '06
even tho his head is a lil small and it doesnt really fit with his body still 5$
I Sing the Body Electric
I Sing the Body Electric on Dec 02 '06
beautiful drawing
beatnik boy
beatnik boy on Dec 02 '06
I dig it, man...great idea
joannchilada
joannchilada on Dec 02 '06
NICE!
rkgiraffe
rkgiraffe on Dec 02 '06
i really like it. 5
brynwyn17
brynwyn17 on Dec 02 '06
I love both colors. And the legs don't look that strange. Cute idea :)
lesquelette
lesquelette on Dec 02 '06
Super on green.
samanthaflute
samanthaflute on Dec 02 '06
I love this!! It'd make an awesome gift for someone I know! $5
A Rose
A Rose on Dec 02 '06
adorable! way cuter than bears or robots any day! $5



LuckyAlice
LuckyAlice on Dec 02 '06
its so cute, i love it on the GREEN
lhercher
lhercher on Dec 02 '06
My only critique is that the skin on the right side of his body (i.e. the stuff that's shaded the darker grey) is too flat and smooth - he doesn't have the normal wrinklyness that an elephant should have, and like is present on his head and left ear. Add more texture and it will be perfect!! Anything with elephants is an instant 5 from me!
mooseinmyshoe
mooseinmyshoe on Dec 02 '06
the legs bother me a lot. Elephants move like horses, the back foot replaces the place where the front foot left the ground. His back left leg (HIS left) is curving under himself, like he has a birth defect...but i really like this idea
McJamie
McJamie on Dec 02 '06
Thanks for all the comments everyone! I really appreciate them, especially on my first submission. I realize there are a few drawing flaws. As far as the feet go, the back left leg is leaning in, but I suppose the expose part shows a bit too much, and then the "whispy" line at the other foot behind it doesn't quit help. :/ Thanks for the critiques, however!
Al Veryard
Al Veryard on Dec 03 '06
very nice style and the green one has a cool feel. Top first sub.
chrisbm
chrisbm on Dec 03 '06
green works the best. 4$
ACSBarbiegirl
ACSBarbiegirl on Dec 03 '06
This is adorable! I didn't notice any flaws until you pointed them out. $5
cearanissa
cearanissa on Dec 04 '06
Not a fan of the yellow but really like :)

$5
color me blank
color me blank on Dec 04 '06
i dont know why, but i really like this.

great job!

$$
matress
matress on Dec 04 '06
i like it on yellow. fix the back legs though. i love it!
kurumimouse
kurumimouse on Dec 04 '06
nice first sub - it's really nice on the green $$!
tulip baroo
tulip baroo on Dec 04 '06
i LOVE this. amazing.
poni dude
poni dude on Dec 04 '06
uff.. nice!
bananabanana
bananabanana on Dec 05 '06
that is so cool, i'd buy one from you personally if it doesn't get printed. On green. 5 $
deibiddo
deibiddo on Dec 05 '06
I like the green much more than the yellow. Also, it took me a while to notice the mouse. I don't know; maybe alter the design a bit to draw a focal point to the mouse?

5
last-shit
last-shit on Dec 05 '06
ahw, nice drawing!
Penguins_Dawn
Penguins_Dawn on Dec 05 '06
lovely on the green $5
tigershark
tigershark on Dec 05 '06
veddy veddy veddy nice and stylistically sweet!
delicatewine
delicatewine on Dec 05 '06
very nice
L1NDSA4Y
L1NDSA4Y on Dec 06 '06
it's surreal. i love it.
YankaThang
YankaThang on Dec 06 '06
very cute concept, but the mouse is nearly unnoticable.
mefx1
mefx1 on Dec 06 '06
nice line work...5
17731773
17731773 on Dec 06 '06
great for 1st sub, beautiful illustration.
katherine8504
katherine8504 on Dec 07 '06
Awesome!!
lofty softy
   lofty softy on Dec 07 '06
so nice and simple. super good.
fabcupcake
fabcupcake on Dec 07 '06
lovely drawing and very touching idea. not keen on the yellow or pink. love the green, it's less jarring to my eyes.
SmellyMonkeyGirl
SmellyMonkeyGirl on Dec 08 '06
its beyond cute.... *Sigh*
Wonko _The_Sane
Wonko _The_Sane on Dec 08 '06
Green is superb!
McJamie
McJamie on Dec 08 '06
2.49? Wow. That's *way* higher than I expected. Thank you for voting, everyone!! This was a very exciting week, and it's all because of you.



Keep on kickin' ass, folks!
163 days later
shiiroze
shiiroze on May 21 '07
ahhh, i really want this shirt!!! =]



even tho voting is over...



$5 :)
15 days later
thewhitewizard34
thewhitewizard34 on Jun 05 '07
try spreading the legs apart a bit, especially the back legs. the face is amazing. The best elephant ive seen on this threadless, otherwise.
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