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Aug 04 '03
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mindkillaz
mindkillaz on Aug 04 '03
Awwww yeah! You came with this one! I really like the greyscale

and the hand and eyeball kick major ass! 5!
(hu(hú
(hu(hú on Aug 05 '03
Pop eye-composition!!!!! great!!!!!!

I like the hipnotic effect and i'm agree with mindkillaz...cooool grayscale!!!!!!! Cinco!
LDVDG
LDVDG on Aug 06 '03
this composition is all over the map. an eye, a hand, a spikey-pot-leaf-thing, a spiral of circles, and a cloud with bubbles. hell, why stop there? you should add a reflection of a kitchen sink in the eyeball.
Backyardian
Backyardian on Aug 06 '03
It reminds me of a bad punk rock tatoo. I think LDVDG is right when she says you have some compostional problems.

I count only three tones I think a fourth tone could be used to push the depth a great deal and that a lot of the background elements could be simplified or erased. traditional tatoo clouds/smoke would probably work better then the concentric circles, and give the same effect I like the bubble border but it just doesn't seem to mesh.

I hope this was constructive and respectful.
exfiniti
exfiniti on Aug 06 '03
it was close enough man, i'm not as hypersensitive and defensive as some of these other kids on this site.

i appreciate the opinion.
(hu(hú
(hu(hú on Aug 06 '03
After loking again and again this art, I changed my mind about one thing, I get rid of the spines.....just that!
Agabaga?
Agabaga? on Aug 06 '03
If the shirt were orange I'd wear it... (I have a pproblem with black shirts for some reason) ... But other than that. It's a nice design.... And people get way too pissed about things that "Have been done before" .... Who gives a damn... I can understand if someone does something really trite, and do it poorly, and demand respect for it. But if it's done well, you can't really argue with it in my opinion.





::yearns for a zoom::



But really.... I dunno.... I think the shirt color takes a lot away.... With it being black, it looks like one of them shirts that all the kids with Jnco's wore for a while.... If that makes any sense... like, all the black shirts with the silver dragons and junk...... Just..... Ok..... Here we go..... On black, it just seems kinda pretentious, in a "I'm dark and this is cool" sorta way.... I say Orange!!!! : ) Yeah.... I'm done now...

Agabaga?
Agabaga? on Aug 07 '03
You know what? No one read my previous post. I was tired, and bitter. Ignore it.



Thank you.
exfiniti
exfiniti on Aug 07 '03
oh man, orange was my original choice actually!!

i had a burnt red in the background but orange wasn't

in the templates so i decided to gray it out and go for black
bunnysurfer
bunnysurfer on Aug 07 '03
Interesting, huh, recognizing that we have two different taste. I wouldn't wear this.
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