Butterflies in my Tummy
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Nov 24 '06
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nice colors i find :)
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why has the one with pizza slice wings have 6 wings?
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maybe if they werent so close together in the tummy
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interesting
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this better get printed.
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this is rad $5
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Cool concept plus design, $5!
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If this gets prints, I am definitely buying.
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The pizza one has six wings because it looks better and has a slanted wings affect to it. As for the stomach to be in the wrong spot, erm minor prob. could be easily fixed. Spread out the butterflies? if you wish could also be easily fixed if more ppl want it that way. Thanks for the comments
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Should I make the butterflies bigger?
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bigger butterflies, more evenly spaced out in the stomach please.
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i love the concept! :)
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FRICKINAWESOME on Nov 25 '06 really good idea, but REALLY bad placement of the "butterflies". Any to add to the unhealthy fatty theme, you could actually have a stick of butter with wings making the butter fly. Oh, and make the old-skool antacid commercial digestive system and draw the connection from a line straight down form the neck into the tummy.
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love it $5
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i agree, space out the butterflies a bit more. great shirt! 5
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Cute. $5
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yeah, space the butterflies a bit more, and you're golden.
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I like this, but I agree with making the butterflies larger. I also think you could put less emphasis on the stomach itself, just allude to it with a shape or something. The butterflies are the most interesting part.
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yes, bigger butterflies! me likee. :)
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Maybe try without the stomach, instead have flowers that are fast food boxes or something?
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i like this a lot better than the other butterflies in the tummy one...
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That's more like butterflies in my kidney. Maybe move it over a little bit?
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This is funny... I would maybe make the "wings" more wing shaped--you'd still recognize them as burgers, buns, etc.--but that's just me. Everyone else seems to like them as they are ('cept bigger). I'd atleast make the pizza slices different... replace the wings made out of two slices with one giant slice per wing?
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