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beatleschiq
beatleschiq aka Sarah Gwan is a girl, has been a member since May 19, 2009, has scored 154 submissions, giving an average score of 2.55, helping 0 designs get printed.
PLEASE

http://www.threadless.com/critique/44293/This_is_how_we_roll

THANK YOU
XO

Chipmnk
Chipmnk on May 27 '09 at 6:49pm
Do whatever mezo says.
beatleschiq
beatleschiq on May 27 '09 at 6:52pm
LMAO...GIVE ME SOME SUGGESTIONS TO IMPROVE THE DESIGN... NOT CREATE A WHOLE NEW ONE..JUST CUZ U WON'T WEAR DOESN'T MEAN SOMEONE ELSE WONT?? RIGHT??
mezo
   mezo on May 27 '09 at 6:57pm
Thus the only way to improve the design is to trash it and start over.



Ditch the text (both font and arch styles)

Ditch the Marylin Monroe bandanna girl.

Ditch the framing.



If you want to do a drug-themed concept, you're gonna have to think subtle if you want it to fly here. Remember the audience. Most voters/consumers of tees here are teenagers who are still in high school.
mezo
   mezo on May 27 '09 at 6:58pm
xoxoxo, alvinpants.
brentendo
brentendo on May 27 '09 at 6:58pm
I think your energy would be better spent researching what works well on this site and coming up with something new. I don't think your design at the moment has much of a future and it would be better to just drop it and try something else
beatleschiq
beatleschiq on May 27 '09 at 7:01pm
OK... SO WHAT'S COOL AROUND HERE? I SEE MONSTERS, DEATH, WEIRD ANIMALS, HALF MAN HALF ANIMANLS, GUNS, LOTS OF FREE HAND DRAWINGS...BUT NOTHING SEEMS TO POP OUT FOR THIS ... THREADLESS WOW FACTOR WHAT IS THE THREADLESS WOW FACTOR SUPPOSED TO BE?
beatleschiq
beatleschiq on May 27 '09 at 7:02pm
PERSON PUKING RAINBOWS?? HOW IS THAT COOL?
Chengui
   Chengui on May 27 '09 at 7:03pm
stop yelling.
shirtflirt
shirtflirt on May 27 '09 at 7:06pm
you need to CALM THE FUCK DOWN and communicate like a rabbit, not a hyena.
mezo
   mezo on May 27 '09 at 7:06pm
Since you can't figure it out for yourself, here's a summary of what Threadless voters enjoy:



1. Puns

2. Intricate hand drawn imagery

3. Merging cute with evil

4. Interesting placements



And so much more.



I really think you're just at the wrong website or have not done research if you can't figure out what makes a well designed tee.
beatleschiq
beatleschiq on May 27 '09 at 7:12pm
sorrrrrrrry guesss no one likes me here.. :(
Chengui
   Chengui on May 27 '09 at 7:12pm
Actually mezo is mistaken. The secret around here (don't tell anyone I let THIS one out of the bag) is do a large full front shirt design in silhouette with a large trees, crows flying and maybe phone lines.



For whatever reason, that's like a winning combo here - they've printed like 50 shirts that fit that description. It's sad because a lot of designers don't want to compromise there style, but it is a definite win.



Good luck!
mezo
   mezo on May 27 '09 at 7:13pm
...hahaha!

shirtflirt
shirtflirt on May 27 '09 at 7:14pm
it's not that people don't like you



have you ever seen a pack of dogs

and then one dog is barking and getting out of hand

then the rest of the dogs pick and nip at the out of control dog

to get that dog in harmony with the rest of the pack?



well it's nothing like that.

people probably don't like you.





jk.
The Amazing Fracturedpope
The Amazing Fracturedpope on May 27 '09 at 7:18pm
We like robots. We like Anthropomorphizing things. We dig retro. We like nature. We don't like internet memes and passing trends. We don't like partisan political statements. We don't think every idea is a winner, so don't get too dismayed first time around.
Chengui
   Chengui on May 27 '09 at 7:20pm
Have you ever been on a bus and everybody is sitting down and reading or having quiet conversation - then someone smashes open the bus doors with a sledge hammer and begins yelling at the top of their lungs into a cell phone about getting advice on a t-shirt design?



I haven't...but this is probably comparable.
ISABOA
   ISABOA on May 27 '09 at 7:21pm
i like stuff that makes me boner up
staffell
   staffell on May 27 '09 at 7:23pm
beatleschiq on May 27 '09 at 7:12pm

sorrrrrrrry guesss no one likes me here.. :(





it's not that, it's just you should learn a bit of thretiquette before appearing to act all mental.



Also, at 22 years old you should really know how to type properly
staffell
   staffell on May 27 '09 at 7:23pm
by thretiquette, i mean general way in which you conduct yourself
The Amazing Fracturedpope
The Amazing Fracturedpope on May 27 '09 at 7:23pm
Brian. You win.
beatleschiq
beatleschiq on May 27 '09 at 7:37pm
Hmmmm... ok
Chengui
   Chengui on May 27 '09 at 8:08pm
yay! I won!
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