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Skeebz
Skeebz aka Heather Skiba is 26.33 years old, has been a member since May 9, 2009, has scored 595 submissions, giving an average score of 3.15, helping 8 designs get printed.
desire

It was unusual for a name to define someone as well as it defined her. No longer than a cuss and just as sharp to the senses. A flick of the tongue in the beginning, and a purr in the ending. Feline and dark and yet so very casual and mysterious. A suave and forbidden creature amongst the mundane and the norm. Desiree.



She almost skips in quick step as she makes her way to the ladies bathroom. Her caution mingling with the charade that her urgency is faithful to the eye. Pushing in on the door the need dwindles to nothing as soon as it closes at her back. Every bit of it shed like a skin. She cools down and becomes casual and lazy, as though suddenly bored with the setting of lemon scented tiles and cold porcelain. Her reflection grins smoothly back at her as she pulls a pipe from one pocket, and a lighter from the other side. Flame casts her white angelic face astray, repainting it red with rebellion and sin. It's a flash in time that lasts no more than a second before the angel magically reforms, and smothers the evil away.

The ghostly whisps and scent of smoke plume and grow, before casually dancing into nothing into the freshly cleaned air. Not a breath later there's a creak behind her, and she knows the door has found it's way open. Left unlocked. There's a pause in time, in her body, where her muscles briefly believe that not moving means being invisible. The mirrors have lost their confident woman, and turned her into a lamb.

Behind her lurks a shadow not unlike the stature of a beast. Light from outside finally kills it's downcast and brings to sight the predator. Rigid and defined, and yet so haunting and curios. Steel edged lips and a slivered curl of a smile hint a sweet death. He moves with a mixture of desire and danger. The stranger now more like a panther on the prowl rather than a man.

This instant breaks what courage remained in the woman now prey, and she flinches back. The lighter falls. Perhaps the only weapon to aid her as the hunger claims her in arms ink stained and steely. She cannot breathe, and her lungs are burning from smoldering ash pulled airborn not yet escaped. For the fire in her chest her mouth cracks and yet she prolongs the final heave. No chance to even scream, a gasp now painful is closed by anothers gone in. Without thinking she accepts this and exchanges the drag. Pleasure and relief tread a thin line of each other as the ache in her lungs starts to subside.

As he is a panther of claws and teeth, she is that panthers allure and beauty. They are one of a kind in a kiss. Pressing lips break and she shudders, but doesn't conflict with her confinement. His face is lost in closed eyes and when she tries to see him she is stopped by the rough, sandy nudge of his face. She can feel him heave a breath that mimics a dragons; both hot and tainted with smoke.

A tiled wall is cold behind her, and before her a wall of heat. Reason teases her senses, but emotion conquers all. She is half scared and half aroused. Neither of which can grow greater than the other. Everything she thought she had before is gone, and there is nothing but dominance and submission.





(Edited to paragraph form for mr. paragraph. . . lol.)
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Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Jun 10 '09 at 12:03am
words.
outline
   outline on Jun 10 '09 at 12:05am
is this porn disguised as a bad grey's anatomy voice over?
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Jun 10 '09 at 12:06am
that's how i read it
WarDrobeInSpareOom
WarDrobeInSpareOom on Jun 10 '09 at 12:07am
outline on Jun 10 '09 at 12:05am

is this porn disguised as a bad grey's anatomy voice over?






....are they good Grey's Anatomy voice overs?
kashlen
kashlen on Jun 10 '09 at 12:07am
outline on Jun 10 '09 at 12:05am

is this porn disguised as a bad grey's anatomy voice over?





LAWL



WarDrobeInSpareOom
WarDrobeInSpareOom on Jun 10 '09 at 12:07am
Are there, rather.
kashlen
kashlen on Jun 10 '09 at 12:08am
deeann yess!!!
outline
   outline on Jun 10 '09 at 12:09am
i know they're good when i barf repeatedly.
kashlen
kashlen on Jun 10 '09 at 12:10am
"At some point, you have to make a decision. Boundaries don't keep other people out. They fence you in. Life is messy. That's how we're made. So, you can waste your lives drawing lines. Or you can live your life crossing them. But there are some lines... that are way too dangerous to cross."

-meredith on grey's anatomy
mike bautista
mike bautista on Jun 10 '09 at 12:10am
I didn't read anything but "Rigid and defined". I am intrigued to read more.
outline
   outline on Jun 10 '09 at 12:11am
her voiceovers always sound like she's a menopausal woman who is watching young couples, wishing that she was boinking everything that moves instead of getting hot flashes and yelling at her husband to stop trying to eat the family dog.
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Jun 10 '09 at 12:12am
I wish she would stop looking so pouty all the time



just tuck in those lips, it's gonna be alright
kashlen
kashlen on Jun 10 '09 at 12:12am
I always liked izzy...too bad they killed her.
mike bautista
mike bautista on Jun 10 '09 at 12:12am
I have never seen Grey's Anatomy.
outline
   outline on Jun 10 '09 at 12:13am
apparently izzy dies.
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Jun 10 '09 at 12:13am
i used to be forced to watch grey's anatomy



fmp



(fuck my past)
outline
   outline on Jun 10 '09 at 12:14am
*points and laughs*
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Jun 10 '09 at 12:14am
:(
WarDrobeInSpareOom
WarDrobeInSpareOom on Jun 10 '09 at 12:15am
Grey's Anatomy pisses me off. Because it's a soap opera, but it thinks its real TV.
Malcolm Man
Malcolm Man on Jun 10 '09 at 12:15am
I might own a few seasons of Grey's Anatomy....Depends on who's askin'.
kashlen
kashlen on Jun 10 '09 at 12:15am
LOL at the direction this blog has taken.



and ef all of you grey's anatomy haters... :( ha ha
mike bautista
mike bautista on Jun 10 '09 at 12:15am
In what situation were you in where you were forced to watch Grey's Anatomy? DWas it punishment for doing bad things?

Chipmnk
Chipmnk on Jun 10 '09 at 12:15am
Hmm, interesting. Not bad. I tend to stray away from the sexual imagery unless it's jokingly just because it's so foreign to me.



But not bad.
mike bautista
mike bautista on Jun 10 '09 at 12:16am
Malcolm, do you have any seasons of Grey's Anatomy?
kashlen
kashlen on Jun 10 '09 at 12:16am
I think statistically if the statistics were statisticized we would find the females on threadless to be heartless and dead on the inside...just based on their tv watching habits, anyway.



:P
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Jun 10 '09 at 12:16am
It was a situation where I lived with someone who liked terrible things
outline
   outline on Jun 10 '09 at 12:18am
i take offense to that. i am horny and bored on the inside at most.
Malcolm Man
Malcolm Man on Jun 10 '09 at 12:18am
*open's trench coat to Mike*
emilymmkay
emilymmkay on Jun 10 '09 at 12:20am
my head already hurts enough tonight. I noticed some cat allusions, so bravo, but I stopped there.
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Jun 10 '09 at 12:21am
For the fire in her chest her mouth cracks and yet she prolongs the final heave.



bitch is gonna esplode!
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Jun 10 '09 at 12:21am
... i read that sentence.
kashlen
kashlen on Jun 10 '09 at 12:27am
outline on Jun 10 '09 at 12:18am

i take offense to that. i am horny and bored on the inside at most.





lol...no offense intended! My apologies!!
WarDrobeInSpareOom
WarDrobeInSpareOom on Jun 10 '09 at 12:48am
Sometimes they smell like lemon. That's the power of Pin Sol!
WarDrobeInSpareOom
WarDrobeInSpareOom on Jun 10 '09 at 12:48am
Or Pine Sol. Both are good.
Malcolm Man
Malcolm Man on Jun 10 '09 at 12:56am
oh fuck.



I've thread quoted too many people tonight.
mike bautista
mike bautista on Jun 10 '09 at 2:37am
All these comments led to me to believe this was dragon porn. I read it, and was let down.
Tikimasters
Tikimasters on Jun 10 '09 at 3:19am
There was no way I was reading all of that. I'll come back when I'm drunk.
Gar0
   Gar0 on Jun 10 '09 at 3:27am
Her caution mingling with the charade that her urgency is faithful to the eye.



I stopped at this point. My urgency is never faithful to the eye. Ever. My urgency gives my faithfulness away. I try not to be urgent.
Krakaboom
   Krakaboom on Jun 10 '09 at 3:30am
I hate Meredith and I hate how everybody talks and talks in exactly the same angst-filled, repetitive way.



But I do like the show.
Skeebz
Skeebz on Jun 10 '09 at 9:47am
Lol. Holy fck, the randomness. You'd think when people post on a blog it's actually about the blog. If ya have so much random stuff to talk about, you should get into a chat room or something. :P Anyway, for the comments that actually pertained to the writing, thanks for the time. Yes, it's a story. Yes, it's stuffed to the brim with metaphoric meaning and poetic interpretation. I illustrate my artwork both graphically and verbally, so if ya don't like it, suck my big fat toe. Yes, the big one, after I've been at work all day in the same shoes I've worn for over two years. Lastly, I don't care about grey's anatomy. I find it ironic that people supposedly horrified by the sight of it can talk so much about it. Anywho, maybe I'll post more writings sometime. But jeeze, what a clusterfck on the comments.

squatterjohn
squatterjohn on Jun 10 '09 at 9:57am
I hate how EVERYTHING happens at the damn hospital. All her friends work at the hospital. All her lovers work at the hospital. All her friends' lovers work at the hospital or are patients at the hospital or are ghhosts at the hospital. All her flatmates work at the hospital. Her freakin' mother worked at the hospital. All her mother's lovers worked at the hospital. All her lovers' exes work at the hospital. If one of her friends has an issue with their families, it's because they're patients at the damn hospital.
tracerbullet
   tracerbullet on Jun 10 '09 at 10:05am
Hi! I'm Mr. Paragraph. Often times people will use me to separate their thoughts when constructing long passages of writing. This is helpful because otherwise the writing becomes difficult to read, and people often lose their spot.



However, it's become a trend on the Internet to ignore me completely. People seem to write and write without any concern for me or my friends, The Punctuation Gang. This makes us sad, because when we all work together, we make writing so much easier to read, and people are more inclined to read it!



So remember, when typing on the Internet, don't be afraid of me, Mr. Paragraph! See you around!
Chipmnk
Chipmnk on Jun 10 '09 at 10:58am
They really should change "blog forums" to just "forums". With the word "blog" in there, people are deluded into thinking that their posts possess some kind of private, xanga characteristic. These really aren't "blogs" by any stretch of the imagination.
Phiffer
Phiffer on Jun 10 '09 at 11:07am
lol @ clusterfck
squatterjohn
squatterjohn on Jun 10 '09 at 11:15am
I don't think anyone thought this was a private xanga thing, it's a piece of fiction.
Skeebz
Skeebz on Jun 10 '09 at 3:47pm
It's my blog and I'll post what I want to. O.o
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Jun 10 '09 at 3:49pm
I thought this was my blog.
Phiffer
Phiffer on Jun 10 '09 at 3:51pm
You mean this isent my blog?



Who's blog is it then?
Steve The Great
Steve The Great on Jun 10 '09 at 3:53pm
I heard it was Skeebz's blog but I can't be sure. One can never be sure.
Skeebz
Skeebz on Jun 10 '09 at 3:54pm
Get out of my blog before I smite you. :P

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