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Jaycee aka James Charlick is a 23.63 year old boy, has been a member since February 23, 2005, has scored 6804 submissions, giving an average score of 0.47.

URL: http://www.squirrelsushi.com

May 27 '06 by Jaycee

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[sub]i picked this for you - revision - updated

you may or may not have seen my latest sub for the blik contest here, but a couple of issues came up with the design. mainly that the cityscape was shoddy, and i agree.

so i wanted to run this revision past everyone before i actually spend any more time on it. i don't have time to waste really if i don't think it's going to help. so, is this an improvement?

you get the idea. replacing the city for text (the title), but then i have to think about things like "has it now lost the really-big-domozilla feel to it?" and "maybe i should add feet after all" and "hmmm, not feeling the flying saucers anymore..." and it all gets a bit confusing.

which is why i want as much input as possible. mainly on whether it's going to make a big difference to everyone if i make any of these changes, but talk about whatever anyway :P

ta.

staffell on May 27 '06 at 5:19am

I like the "i picked" bit. the "this for you" bit seems too bland and thus conflicts with the rest of the piece.

staffell on May 27 '06 at 5:19am

the type i mean

Jaycee on May 27 '06 at 5:22am

i didn't finish that bit yet, it was just to show how the layout would be when i do :P

Jaycee on May 27 '06 at 5:24am

i'm going to close the gaps between some of the letters and play with the foreground/background lettering a little more i think too...

Jaycee on May 27 '06 at 4:27pm

different time of day, same question anyone?

5115 on May 27 '06 at 4:34pm

<3 finish the rest and you go from a 3 to a 5$

Jaycee on May 27 '06 at 8:41pm

thanks :)

Stevethegreat on May 27 '06 at 8:44pm

I lik 'em both!

Jaycee on May 28 '06 at 1:10am

still needs feet, possibly more background (suggestions?) and i'm going to slant the ED so they're leaning on the K in PICKED. you should be able to see the D better then too.

what about people running away from his feet?

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+Carried Away with 3.53! Thanks to everyone and anyone who voted! I'm well chuffed I am! lol.

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+Interplanetary Braindrain - Roboshobo
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+07734 - scottywierd
+Sheep Razor - kidd325
+It's A Bottle Jim! - Glennz
+Yeti - Bakword
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+Anteater - Bakword
+Unusual Laundry - zaxnorm
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+Sweet Creep - filvb //printed
+Basket Case - SUKCESS
+Life Lessons - travis76
+No Sushie Please - Rikke S
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