That is awesome, once it's painted it will like even more awesome on a tee.

you need to add something else to it, maybe other goats sleeping peaceful while the goat eating coffee beans keeps at it in the middle of the night.

Thanks soloyo thats helpful :)

needs stained teeth

ah yes, go on go on :)

i dig the idea alot!!!

UPDATE:

RED eyes

a few calmly sleeping sheeps in the background would be nice.

this is coming along nicely!

and i 2nd the idea for sleeping sheeps in the back ground... or just calm sheeps eating grass...

This looks nice.
Maybe make the saucer higher up, or more distinguishable as to not appear as a claw.
I'd also suggest losing the red from the eyes (waste of a colour and looks unsightly) and also the yellow from the teeth.

the fur could be a bit lighter/ whiter (looks nicer in first sketch) and the horns could be a bit more detailed/3D.

Saying all this, I'd also like to say the artwork looks really nice so far and the concept is solid-Soloyo's extra background idea would also make it very interesting.

Good Luck!

PS The red from the eyes and yellow teeth are also negative associations to do with drinking coffee, so it would be doubtful a coffee company/ coffeee lovers would like that aspect of the design.

im a bit stuck and frustrated with the last one. I agree the red eyes and yellow teeth might be a bit negative.. Yeah I dno Ill finish it in the next couple of days.. in the meanwhile i had another idea :D :



to include or not to include text?

Oh this is just a sketch btw

The last one was great, carry on with it. My comments were for you just to perfect it!

nice..a camel would be cool too and easier to relate to the 'Arabica' term

Still working on the other one! It's getting there..

I have a feeling that one will get declined because of the copyrighted character. It's not really satire, it's just Captain Planet drinking coffee for some reason. But keep on keepin' on.

Oh how nice. My photoshop crashed after drawing this. Only saved the tiny jpg :D

Maybe the surrounding leaves dont really fit anyway... Orrr?

Aaahhh its not workng :(

Thanks for the comments btw :)

i like the original colorway you had going in your initial steps

cool. i feel the cup and saucer are too similar to the color of the goat's fur, and get lost a bit. maybe distinguish them with slightly bolder lines, or maybe add a tinge of cream/off-white to the goat's fur. Also, the irises could be a little more bold.

Do you mean the white background littlem?

True the cup and saucer do get lost a bit.. Maybe bolder lines or just holding a much bigger cup with both hands?

make the goat body shorter

Wont be able to finish this in time, Leaving to go to the other side of the world damnnnooooo :)